C.a.l.

thebetterman

i pass you once again
not knowing what to say
is it me
is it you
a bit of both?
it could be true

we chat for a minute
keep up the facade
do you notice?
do you miss it?
you must realize
and reminisce it

I want to go back
to our kinder days
filled with jokes
and pranks
drenched in love
and thanks

there are times
i see in you
the person
that i once knew
and its those times
i do persue

coleen

there is such a pure and simple sweetness to your poems please don't ever lose the kindness or vulnerability you've shared with us.

thebetterman

the sweetness of your comment is at least double whatever sweetness i have in my poem, thank you.

PearlsGirl

You're poems are oh so beautiful, but sometimes (literally) heart throbbing. I can tell you this for a fact though, I'm positive that your girl must miss you bunches. I read the poems you write to her and she is more than lucky to have you. You have an amazing heart full of love and kindness for her. She'll turn around, it will be come better. Everything is already getting better. Don't worry and always smile. You'll get to hold her again and soon enough, all those silly jokes and fun(ny) games will come back and you will feel nothing less than perfect love.
good luck betterman, I know your girl loves you more than life itself.

MeddleDeal

pure beauty Kev, bro. it is so touching how it is so simple, but yet, so beautiful. I makes me think about my situation.:(

ISN

this made me think about my past.....about the terrible complexity of life.....and it's awful threat......and still it didn't answer the age-old question......but it's certainly simple and sweet