for better or for worse

thebettermanthebetterman Posts: 657
edited October 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
you're a mystery
nothing more can be said
i dont understand it
why we're still here

anyone else would have killed me
anyone else would be dead
but theres something about us
that defies the logic of man

no use in looking for answers
the search would drive us crazy
crazier than we already are
and we cant afford any more

but to this day i'm drawn
to the passion you hold
and the closeness we share
destined to take on this world together

you are my partner in this fucked up world
for better or for worse
but one thing i know, if we go down
there's no one i'd rather be with
-one thing to remember, always have a good time, all the time
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  • MeddleDealMeddleDeal Posts: 2,547
    lovely poem Kev. Sums up my relationship w/my boyfriend in a way.

    But together, no matter what, the couple in the poem will somehow always ends up together.
    ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~
    ~*STONEY PONY all the WAY!*~
    ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~~*~*~
    "For the world, not for the war"-Neil Finn
  • nad!

    you know what, i guess it does sum up your relationship with your... boyfriend? It sums up my relationship with my best friend, and current partner in lonesomeness and sorrow.

    ps, how the hell are you? i'll try to write you in the morning, but i'm completely exhausted right now.
    -one thing to remember, always have a good time, all the time
  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    nad!

    you know what, i guess it does sum up your relationship with your... boyfriend? It sums up my relationship with my best friend, and current partner in lonesomeness and sorrow.

    ps, how the hell are you? i'll try to write you in the morning, but i'm completely exhausted right now.

    :D haha the for better or worse thing made me think it was about a partner, but I can see the best friend thing too. I like it.
  • MeddleDealMeddleDeal Posts: 2,547
    nad!

    you know what, i guess it does sum up your relationship with your... boyfriend? It sums up my relationship with my best friend, and current partner in lonesomeness and sorrow.

    ps, how the hell are you? i'll try to write you in the morning, but i'm completely exhausted right now.

    yeah, it seems like you kind of tapped into something there :o

    I'm doing okay. And I don't know whose turn it is to write...haha...been one busy girl that I forgot. haha miss ya lil bro!
    ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~
    ~*STONEY PONY all the WAY!*~
    ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~~*~*~
    "For the world, not for the war"-Neil Finn
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    Very nice. It has similarities to mine and my husband's relationship.
  • the heavens know i've been there, too!!!
    Put me in coach...I'm ready to
    Fuck up...the USA...
    Look at me...I can rig...
    The presidency!!!!
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