try try try

thebettermanthebetterman Posts: 657
edited October 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
its been three months maybe to the day
since you told me that "we" should go away
i've fought and i've tried to keep you
and i've fought and i've tried to move on too
but neither has worked and here i am
living this life that seems a sham

i want to tell you that i'm sorry but
i still love you no matter what
with my heart i beg and i plead
but it still tells me you're what i need
try try try as hard as i might
its you and me that still sounds right

i dont know what to say or do
i try to stay quiet to protect you
and keep it inside me so you dont know
off all this sorrow and all this woe
the leads from me missing and wanting
to ask you back even though its daunting
-one thing to remember, always have a good time, all the time
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Comments

  • Beautiful. Straight on and perfect.
    7/10/06
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    Really nice but sad. I hope things improve for you soon.
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    To the point.Nice work.

    Its best to work through your problems and verbalize,
    but writing them down for yourself starts to clear things up....

    Stellar.
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
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