Had a Bad Dream

CranMalReignCranMalReign Posts: 1,928
edited December 2003 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Thought I'd share something a little quicker paced and rhymy after reading some White Girl Rap.

Had a Bad Dream
May 23, 2002

Slash
mashin'
thrashin'
through a clash
of rabid passion
fruit

You knew
what I could
do to you
in pursuit of
hunger and
stupefied delusions

But we stopped,
laughed,
dropped the pants and madness
dragged the rotten pox
and sores
and filth
from the burrows

Drowned them out
blown down without a
cloud of doubt
between the sour hours spent
delaying the rain
and daydreaming
about the
splayed
frayed
wishes
of my Dick and will to live

Rich, implicit
lurid clippings of ego and id
Filled to the brim of the brain
with hatred
and love
and poetry of the soul and groin

We suffered unjust thrusts
muscled by gusto
crawling with the boys dragging
through a slough of muck and
bugs
swept under the
rug in lust
and tears
and fears
eating my own veneer
with bleeding teeth
and a sneer

Gnashing
Slashing
Crashing lad
we shagged like mad
I had a bad dream
of you
and me
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  • Diggin the rythym of this......time for read number three.
  • Originally posted by CranMalReign

    Slash
    mashin'
    thrashin'
    through a clash
    of rabid passion
    fruit



    MMMMMMM, Passion fruit .

    Were the sheets stained? ;)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • can i have some whipped cream with that passion fruit?










    Originally posted by CranMalReign
    Thought I'd share something a little quicker paced and rhymy after reading some White Girl Rap.

    Had a Bad Dream
    May 23, 2002

    Slash
    mashin'
    thrashin'
    through a clash
    of rabid passion
    fruit

    You knew
    what I could
    do to you
    in pursuit of
    hunger and
    stupefied delusions

    But we stopped,
    laughed,
    dropped the pants and madness
    dragged the rotten pox
    and sores
    and filth
    from the burrows

    Drowned them out
    blown down without a
    cloud of doubt
    between the sour hours spent
    delaying the rain
    and daydreaming
    about the
    splayed
    frayed
    wishes
    of my Dick and will to live

    Rich, implicit
    lurid clippings of ego and id
    Filled to the brim of the brain
    with hatred
    and love
    and poetry of the soul and groin

    We suffered unjust thrusts
    muscled by gusto
    crawling with the boys dragging
    through a slough of muck and
    bugs
    swept under the
    rug in lust
    and tears
    and fears
    eating my own veneer
    with bleeding teeth
    and a sneer

    Gnashing
    Slashing
    Crashing lad
    we shagged like mad
    I had a bad dream
    of you
    and me
    Love is for the the lonely
    Money for the poor
    Hate is for the insecure
    War is for the weak
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    You should definitly go to a MAJOR poetry slam and read off!
    I was never one for therapy...id and ego and sex...
    those shrinks need a good ass whoopin.
    dig?
    aDV
    Yea..corporate politics!!!Blahhh!
    Love your daughters quote...
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • Originally posted by CranMalReign

    through a slough of muck and
    bugs
    swept under the
    rug in lust



    fuck yeah :)
    ~all is full of love~
  • Originally posted by babysistermama
    can i have some whipped cream with that passion fruit?

    YAY! YOU'RE BACK!!!! I've missed you!
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