Brownies Plymouth
CranMalReign
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Boy oh boy do I hate dance clubs.
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Brownies Plymouth
November 2, 2002
Sultry slime floods saturate
the turbulent sea
of 20-something skin and high schoolers
with fake ids and burning loins
Walls of dimly lit pornography
bleed hormones like blood from a hatchet wound
while hips and hands pump to the beat
of unsolicited groinal thrusts
and sextastic strobe lighting
Greased up roofie couriers
and eye-flashing bait-and-switch vaginas
putrify the air with áu d'aphrodisiac
and the funk of cigs mingled
with public dryfucking
(as dry as denim-cloaked boners
and panty-free clap traps)
The seething pulse of remixes and hard cola
sucks up the languid bystanders,
ascimilating them into tit squeezing
and fake phone numbers
No one has a face here,
just a crotch and a flavor
umf umf umf umf umf umf umf umf
GIMME ANOTHER BEER!
I need to get my drunk on
~~~
Brownies Plymouth
November 2, 2002
Sultry slime floods saturate
the turbulent sea
of 20-something skin and high schoolers
with fake ids and burning loins
Walls of dimly lit pornography
bleed hormones like blood from a hatchet wound
while hips and hands pump to the beat
of unsolicited groinal thrusts
and sextastic strobe lighting
Greased up roofie couriers
and eye-flashing bait-and-switch vaginas
putrify the air with áu d'aphrodisiac
and the funk of cigs mingled
with public dryfucking
(as dry as denim-cloaked boners
and panty-free clap traps)
The seething pulse of remixes and hard cola
sucks up the languid bystanders,
ascimilating them into tit squeezing
and fake phone numbers
No one has a face here,
just a crotch and a flavor
umf umf umf umf umf umf umf umf
GIMME ANOTHER BEER!
I need to get my drunk on
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very vivid imagery in this one leaving no room for mistaking how you feel about the club scene.
So f-ing true CMR! Quite an amusing/disgusting scene! I love dancing and getting drunk and stoned (immaculate:D) but I hate these meat market morons! And I'm not one to shy away from my meat and all!
In the days when my girls and I would head out to the club I always had to make sure that they were going to dance...and not to pick up losers!
These places are as sad and devoid of emotion as strip clubs.
Great poem CMR!
I like strip clubs, tho.
I've been to both male & female strip clubs. I do not like male strip clubs! And I can handle the female ones only because I'm friends with some dancers (and girls are prettier to look at naked!)
But I still find some of the things that go on to be sad.
If you're just there for a good time that's one thing but some lonely souls get caught up in "the scene" and I just find that sad.
Indeed.
Actually, I don't really like strip joints. I find them rather soulless and degrading. Yah, there's a certain good feeling I get when this really cute little mostly nekkid thang rubs her tits and ass on me in the hopes of pulling in a dollar bill... but it gets old rather fast.
And I feel sorry for them.
So do I!!!!
The things one does for money-fucking money!
Seriously!
I'd do it for free.
LOL! I do it for free too!
We should get together.