I'd Like to Feel Strong, Please

CranMalReignCranMalReign Posts: 1,928
edited February 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I'd Like to Feel Strong, Please
August 13, 2001

Please, I'd like to degrade you
With your permission, of course

If you like
I want to watch you do it
I want to look down and see myself
Being powerful
And in control

I would like to feel important
Hovering over you
Owning another shred of that dignity you offer
As a bloodied lamb
With each inch slipped into your face

If it doesn't pose a problem for you
Could you swallow it
So that I may bask in the ecstasy
Of blasting bitter reminders of how small you are
Down your thirsty gullet

But if you'd rather do something else
That's fine, too
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  • Whoa! Wow, Cran!
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • Originally posted by Being Enlightened
    Whoa! Wow, Cran!

    I require more data to properly interpret your input.
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  • even flow?even flow? Posts: 8,066
    Are the hands on the hips? :)
    You've changed your place in this world!
  • Originally posted by CranMalReign
    I require more data to properly interpret your input.

    It was one of those that just slaps you in the face (if you give it permission ;) ).
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • Originally posted by even flow?
    Are the hands on the hips? :)

    Only one was on the hip. The other was on the back of her head (but she had to put it there).
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  • even flow?even flow? Posts: 8,066
    Originally posted by CranMalReign
    Only one was on the hip. The other was on the back of her head (but she had to put it there).

    Nice!!!
    You've changed your place in this world!
  • Originally posted by Being Enlightened
    It was one of those that just slaps you in the face (if you give it permission ;) ).

    LOVE IT! Probably the most accurate portrayal of me, I think.
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  • YellowYellow Posts: 699
    yella's heart go


    oweee
    It's all yellow.


  • cassiacassia Posts: 277
    gotta love that silverback tune, eh..."iloveyour pants around yr feet...I LOVE YOU LOOKING UP AT ME...."
    I like the end of yr poem, kinda like ok we can watch NASCAR instead, for a healthy surge of male dominance :) or not....
  • YellowYellow Posts: 699
    cranman... pls see The Sand :)
    It's all yellow.


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