Here's a fun poem I wrote... Check it out
pearlzepfan
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It doesn't have a title yet but I put it to chords and it sounds pretty good.
Are you the same one that last night I was with
It's hard to take in I can't believe this
She used to be kind
She used to be free
What's happening with her is changin' me
We spoke through our hearts
Tears down her face
Tasteless thoughts of innocense that can't be explained
When we were young we had so much fun
It's hard to adjust that she's not the same one
The words fill my head
And in speaking the truth
"What happened between us, what's going on with you?"
"Nothing" she said
So quickly replied
"You just stopped staring into my eyes"
A beautiful creature once walked the Earth
She was an angel already at birth
I can't see through it
What did I do
Lightning outside surrounded me and you
How did this happen
Can we be saved
Or is it too late for a simple change
Believe me when I tell you what we had was real
Now she is gone so far away it's her I can't feel
A simple apology
An unpleasant thought
Our love was wild but eventually caught
I can't believe
Any of this
I was trapped by her soul from the very first kiss
Worthy of my love she can come back some day
An explanation for leaving she won't have to say
Innocent love
Was once lost at sea
If you come back to me we'll forever be free
Her gypsy eyes
And her mercury mouth
Dylan said that but it works somehow
Are you the same one that last night I was with
It's hard to take in I can't believe this
She used to be kind
She used to be free
What's happening with her is changin' me
We spoke through our hearts
Tears down her face
Tasteless thoughts of innocense that can't be explained
When we were young we had so much fun
It's hard to adjust that she's not the same one
The words fill my head
And in speaking the truth
"What happened between us, what's going on with you?"
"Nothing" she said
So quickly replied
"You just stopped staring into my eyes"
A beautiful creature once walked the Earth
She was an angel already at birth
I can't see through it
What did I do
Lightning outside surrounded me and you
How did this happen
Can we be saved
Or is it too late for a simple change
Believe me when I tell you what we had was real
Now she is gone so far away it's her I can't feel
A simple apology
An unpleasant thought
Our love was wild but eventually caught
I can't believe
Any of this
I was trapped by her soul from the very first kiss
Worthy of my love she can come back some day
An explanation for leaving she won't have to say
Innocent love
Was once lost at sea
If you come back to me we'll forever be free
Her gypsy eyes
And her mercury mouth
Dylan said that but it works somehow
"I'm a thief, and I dig it"
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I also like the Jimi reference: "gypsy eyes"; and the allusion to Dylan's "Sad Eyed Lady" in "mercury mouth."
nice - i like it too
~it is shining it is shining~