~Remedy~

MoonlightingMoonlighting Posts: 136
edited October 2003 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
From your lips,
to my ears,
the sweetest melody,
as though an angel were calling,
as though a flower was blooming.
My soul was captured,
like a fish in a net,
but I had no thought of struggling,
no escape,
embrace my fate,
my entranced spirit,
commited,absolute.
Absolute Equality.No more.No less - AHFA
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  • FelicityFelicity Posts: 339
    isn't it phenomenal that pearl jam lovers feel these things in the same way, the whole world over?

    i love it.
  • Such a fragile creature.
    Why does she not struggle?
    Why does she not fear?
    Perhaps she was awaiting this moment.
    Perhaps now she will be free.
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • It is true,
    that I waited for one like you,
    ever,endlessly,
    the poison which made me stronger,
    the aura which glowed with passion.
    No need for justification,
    this is my crucifixation,
    nailed down to you,
    bleeding allegence.
    To the thunderous rapture,
    I will never control.
    Absolute Equality.No more.No less - AHFA
  • Your life's blood
    Bleeds with mine
    I bear your cross
    I am your cross
    Perhaps together
    We can find strength
    We will not control ourselves
    And will not allow them their control
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • I feel your gentle spirit,
    touches mine,
    on this short journey,
    entwined through time.
    My friend,those rose petals,
    falling from within,
    land gently on my heart,
    cleanse my sin.
    Absolute Equality.No more.No less - AHFA
  • keven 33keven 33 Posts: 259
    awesome poetry
    i feel run over again
    drinking is bad
    convicted
  • keven

    Do you feel bad cause you're drinking still
    or just hungover?

    Drinking in excess is bad!
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • Originally posted by Moonlighting
    I feel your gentle spirit,
    touches mine,
    on this short journey,
    entwined through time.
    My friend,those rose petals,
    falling from within,
    land gently on my heart,
    cleanse my sin.

    I absorb your sin
    It comforts me
    Reminds me
    Of who I am
    One day
    I'll take it all
    And take it back to where we came from
    One day, a clean slate,
    one day, to begin again
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • Originally posted by Moonlighting


    thunderous rapture



    man, that's beautiful...
    ~all is full of love~
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