i dunno

El_KabongEl_Kabong Posts: 4,141
edited September 2008 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
something i found in a notebook from a few years ago...a little choppy




didn't you get my S.O.S.?
didn't you receive my urgent messages?
i've been trying to hold on
i keep lookin, but i...
i keep hopin, but i...
i don't see no one
where did you go?
what's takin so long?
all i've done is dream of you
of being in your arms
i don't know your name, but i...
i don't know your face, but i...
i know how you feel
i feel you in my head
and in my sleep i buried my love in your backyard
giving your heart the only map
i know you shine so brightly like a star in the sky
but can't we meet somewhere besides my dreams?
can't my soul know your touch in real life?
and it occurred to me the other day
that the wind only blows so it can feel that tingle
as it strokes your cheek
flowing through your hair
flowers only bloom in the desperate hope
of being gazed upon by your deep eyes
its grand dream of but for that brief span of time
it had been
everything
in your eyes
and let's be honest with ourselves
if but for a second
why else would a bird even bother to sing
but to wish to have your attention?
for that moment to be the center of your thoughts
hanging on its every sound
forever warming up until that magical day
that you happen by their way and the real
rendition can begin
and it could die happy
and a secret
just between you and me
because i like you so
what other reason for the snooze button to be
but to say 'i don't want to stop hold you yet'
i'm not ready to let go of this feeling
of being so at ease
so connected
so at peace
so complete
it has to know how perfectly our arms fir around each other
it knows this intense feeling that radiates between you and me
the way every cell celebrates as my foot rubs against yours
finally the producers and casting agents had come through
they had bothered with character development in the script
all those bad movies
with their obvious and contrived plot lines
with it's stalled and stagnate character arcs
they had all been worth being in
so sure the map had been correct so far
knowing no wrong turns could have been made
for it lead to you, my love
and there couldn't possibly be anywhere else i'd want to be
it may as well have been written in stone
it is infallible
it is the only scientifically accepted answer of
'it just is'
and for anything lucky enough to be in the presence of infinite beauty
of a soul so complete, so strong
i tell you it knows what hope is
and the idea of 'what else can i do?' will never flicker away
she will never be distracted by the pretty pictures or shiny objects
she is the meaning of happiness
she is the reason to smile
she is the reason to be
standin above the crowd
he had a voice that was strong and loud and
i swallowed his facade cos i'm so
eager to identify with
someone above the crowd
someone who seemed to feel the same
someone prepared to lead the way
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Comments

  • Love it!!! DAMN
    >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <3
  • Gettin Jammed by that cunt as usual...
    YOu gotta stop thinking with that dick..
    There is only one thing gonna set me free
    and that is just you and I

    Here all this time Im thinking your totally concentrating on me...

    BUT that bitch and I have gotten into before over you and that was for good reason
    now shape up your ass before the world explodes...

    FUCKING ASSHOLE... DIDNT I TELL you that already YOUR WIFE WOULD BE PISSED!!!!! NOW~!!! GET THE FUCK HOME!
  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    well done Kabong
    i look forward to reading more from you
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
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