Undefined

sliiteofhandsliiteofhand Posts: 64
edited February 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
"UNDEFINED"

Im looking out my window..
I see the night sky...
I turn my head and I see the red...
breaklights of a passerby...

Im looking out my window..
I see an empty street...
I turn my head and I see the shadow...
and I hear the sound of a strangers feet...

Im looking out my window..
I see the moon on the water...
I touch my head and I feel the red...
my face is gettin hotter...

Are you thinking about me somewhere,
Am I somehow on your mind...
I hope to see you again one day...
cuz I'm still undefined...

Are you thinking about me out there,
Do you wonder whats on my mind?
I hope to see you again one day...
cuz I'm still undefined...

Im looking out my window...
I see the lights of the harbor...
I shake my head and I feel the dread...
that you might have found another...

Im looking out my window...
I see a star blinkin...
I nod my head and frown to myslef...
As I wonder what you might be thinking...

Are you thinking about me somewhere,
Am I somehow on your mind...
I hope to see you again one day...
cuz I'm still undefined...

Are you thinking about me out there,
Do you wonder whats on my mind?
I hope to see you again one day...
cuz I'm still undefined...

Are you thinking about me somewhere,
Am I somehow on your mind...
I hope to see you again one day...
cuz I'm still undefined...
"Wave to all my friends"
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Comments

  • ExodusExodus Posts: 212
    i can see where you're goin with this and it seems like a good start/idea...
    the only thing that gets to me is i hate rhyming schemes.
    but thats just me...and some other people... some poepl like rhymes..
    im gonna stop talking now....
    Between the conception and the creation

    Between the emotion and the response

    Falls the shadow.
  • rhyming schemes are kinda played out...but when I write, I just write, i dont have a scheme in mind or a way to write, it just comes out
    "Wave to all my friends"
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