"religion"

even flow?even flow? Posts: 8,066
edited November 2003 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Down on your knees
A need to pray
Looking for a beacon
To light your final day
Funny how god is an answer
To every loser who dosen't want to die
Pick on a Muslim
Look in the South
Those white in-bred fuckers
Spew the same shit from their mouth
At least they are not afraid of their fate
Your southern religion has just as much hate
So don't use religion as a crutch
Even though it is only as much
I thought religion was the reason for peace
Seems like god's name is up for a lease
When pray becomes prey
God will have nothing to say
For if it is watching
His vision unfold
Please don't recite to me
From the bible you hold
Native Indians
Had it right all along
Until the white man came calling
Telling them right from wrong
If everyone who is a fanatic
Would just fuck off and die
The world would be a better place
Without religion
For you and I
You've changed your place in this world!
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  • ...if there's a God in the sky, looking down, what would He think of the world that He created?...
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • even flow?even flow? Posts: 8,066
    Originally posted by Being Enlightened
    ...if there's a God in the sky, looking down, what would He think of the world that He created?...
    Probably that it better flood this fucking place again. Before Adolph Bush fucks it up first!!!!!!!
    You've changed your place in this world!
  • even flow?even flow? Posts: 8,066
    God if you didn't see this the first time. Ha Ha Ha
    You've changed your place in this world!
  • BhagavadGitaBhagavadGita Posts: 1,748
    Religion is for people who are AFRAID to go to hell.

    Spirituality is for people who have already BEEN THERE.
  • I have just recently (5 minutes ago) joined this board and I am already so impressed with the amount of thought that goes into each post. It is so different than the Local H board. I totally dig the poem even flow! Peace.
    “DON'T TELL ME this IS REAL because it is the edge chunk of what I feel!”

    -Michael McClure
  • KwyjiboKwyjibo Posts: 662
    "religion don't mean a thing, its just another way to be right wing"
    ~spoon
    Its sad that in the past few hundred years that there is 'no God, only religion'
    The most remarkable thing about you standing in the doorway, is that its you, and that you're standing in the doorway.

    I write down good reasons to freeze to death in my spiral ring notebook. But in the long tresses of your hair--I am a babbling brook.
  • keven 33keven 33 Posts: 259
    a little rough on the so called white man

    there arent any white men or black men

    but we do have white in our eyes

    unless you stoned
    convicted
  • even flow?even flow? Posts: 8,066
    I bet this would get far in the poetry contest?
    You've changed your place in this world!
  • Originally posted by even flow?
    When pray becomes prey
    God will have nothing to say

    GREAT lines!

    Here's my two pence... would really piss off our long-absent andy wood lover. And may offend some others... so beware. :) CMR = Offensive

    ~~~

    Alabama Contraband
    March 22, 2002

    I want to
    fuck God in the ass
    Worship Satan while wearing
    women's underwear
    and kill children

    I want to
    wipe my ass
    with the Book of Job
    and have premarital
    bi
    group
    sex
    on the steps of a church
    on the Sabbath

    I want to
    spit on Billy Graham,
    fuck during the 700 Club,
    and watch movies about
    women as sex toys
    and men as machine gun practice
    where the body count is only eclipsed
    by the tits

    I want to blast
    Marilyn Manson
    and bitch on public access television
    about how the government
    is a bunch of dualistic
    sexually dysfunctioned leeches
    while I skull rape
    the characters from Veggie Tales

    I want you
    to piss me off
    if you feel it's in your heart to do so

    I love fags
    and dykes
    who pierce everything they have
    I love liars
    and sodomites

    and believe in dinosaurs

    I evolved from a
    monkey a
    fish a
    germ a
    puddle

    and think Christ is a happy
    smiling
    puppet
    with scary bleeding hands
    that the Pope dances in front
    of bewildered children

    I like the words
    "cock"
    "cunt"
    "fuck"
    "twat"
    "goddamn"
    "jesus christ"
    "goddamn jesus fuckin' christ's cock"
    Because if they say what I mean
    They're art to me

    I believe that negros and witches
    are real people too

    I believe that children
    can be wiser than their parents
    if their parents
    have their heads up their asses
    or voted Republican

    I
    masturbate
    often
    use contraceptives
    religiously
    waste my seed
    paint with semen
    walk around nude
    splay my wares
    share the wealth
    want a harem
    eye for an eye
    thou shalt not kill
    tooth for a tooth
    turn the other cheek
    live
    die
    swear
    lie
    beat off a dog
    covet my neighbor
    read Tolkien

    and want to

    have 35 babies,
    name them all after Bible characters,
    pray to God,
    and then drown them all
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  • Originally posted by CranMalReign
    GREAT lines!

    Here's my two pence... would really piss off our long-absent andy wood lover. And may offend some others... so beware. :) CMR = Offensive

    ~~~

    Alabama Contraband
    March 22, 2002

    I want to
    fuck God in the ass
    Worship Satan while wearing
    women's underwear
    and kill children

    I want to
    wipe my ass
    with the Book of Job
    and have premarital
    bi
    group
    sex
    on the steps of a church
    on the Sabbath

    I want to
    spit on Billy Graham,
    fuck during the 700 Club,
    and watch movies about
    women as sex toys
    and men as machine gun practice
    where the body count is only eclipsed
    by the tits

    I want to blast
    Marilyn Manson
    and bitch on public access television
    about how the government
    is a bunch of dualistic
    sexually dysfunctioned leeches
    while I skull rape
    the characters from Veggie Tales

    I want you
    to piss me off
    if you feel it's in your heart to do so

    I love fags
    and dykes
    who pierce everything they have
    I love liars
    and sodomites

    and believe in dinosaurs

    I evolved from a
    monkey a
    fish a
    germ a
    puddle

    and think Christ is a happy
    smiling
    puppet
    with scary bleeding hands
    that the Pope dances in front
    of bewildered children

    I like the words
    "cock"
    "cunt"
    "fuck"
    "twat"
    "goddamn"
    "jesus christ"
    "goddamn jesus fuckin' christ's cock"
    Because if they say what I mean
    They're art to me

    I believe that negros and witches
    are real people too

    I believe that children
    can be wiser than their parents
    if their parents
    have their heads up their asses
    or voted Republican

    I
    masturbate
    often
    use contraceptives
    religiously
    waste my seed
    paint with semen
    walk around nude
    splay my wares
    share the wealth
    want a harem
    eye for an eye
    thou shalt not kill
    tooth for a tooth
    turn the other cheek
    live
    die
    swear
    lie
    beat off a dog
    covet my neighbor
    read Tolkien

    and want to

    have 35 babies,
    name them all after Bible characters,
    pray to God,
    and then drown them all

    And offensive = melikes! :D Just don't name one Noah--he may float.
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • Originally posted by Being Enlightened
    And offensive = melikes! :D Just don't name one Noah--he may float.

    Woah... then by association... CMR = melikes! bitchin'
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  • Originally posted by CranMalReign
    Woah... then by association... CMR = melikes! bitchin'

    Not just bitchin'----GROOVY!
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • coleencoleen Posts: 938
    god damn cmr tell us how you really feel :)

    thats what i appreciate most about your poems - unabashed and uncensored unloading
  • GouletGoulet Posts: 918
    i used to write a lot of poems like these:
    angry
    and anti:
    religion-government-the man-society-commercialism-etc,
    but now i don't
    because i don't write anymore.
  • coleencoleen Posts: 938
    Originally posted by Goulet
    but now i don't
    because i don't write anymore.

    i am putting this line along with anything remotely similar to it on my ignore list.

    don't write for now if you don't feel it....but don't say you don't write anymore. please, or at least don't mean that you don't write anymore.
  • Originally posted by coleen
    i am putting this line along with anything remotely similar to it on my ignore list.

    don't write for now if you don't feel it....but don't say you don't write anymore. please, or at least don't mean that you don't write anymore.

    I'm with coleen on this one!
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • Originally posted by Being Enlightened
    I'm with coleen on this one!

    Like I said in some other post somewhere... Hiatus is not death! I used to say I didn't write anymore. Then one day, one fell out. Have faith!
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  • even flow?even flow? Posts: 8,066
    Cran-man your poem almost brought a tear to my eye. A lovely piece of work. Sorry god damned work has me working and I can't respond fast enough.
    You've changed your place in this world!
  • Originally posted by even flow?
    Cran-man your poem almost brought a tear to my eye. A lovely piece of work. Sorry god damned work has me working and I can't respond fast enough.

    It was a tear-jerker, wasn't it? ;)

    Good thing work doesn't have me working. Mmm... not working...

    Sorry for your dilemma, however. (working, that is)
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  • I want to
    fuck God in the ass
    Worship Satan while wearing
    women's underwear
    and kill children

    I want to
    wipe my ass
    with the Book of Job
    and have premarital
    bi
    group
    sex
    on the steps of a church
    on the Sabbath

    I want to
    spit on Billy Graham,
    fuck during the 700 Club,
    and watch movies about
    women as sex toys
    and men as machine gun practice
    where the body count is only eclipsed
    by the tits

    I want to blast
    Marilyn Manson
    and bitch on public access television
    about how the government
    is a bunch of dualistic
    sexually dysfunctioned leeches
    while I skull rape
    the characters from Veggie Tales

    I want you
    to piss me off
    if you feel it's in your heart to do so

    I love fags
    and dykes
    who pierce everything they have
    I love liars
    and sodomites

    and believe in dinosaurs

    I evolved from a
    monkey a
    fish a
    germ a
    puddle

    and think Christ is a happy
    smiling
    puppet
    with scary bleeding hands
    that the Pope dances in front
    of bewildered children

    I like the words
    "cock"
    "cunt"
    "fuck"
    "twat"
    "goddamn"
    "jesus christ"
    "goddamn jesus fuckin' christ's cock"
    Because if they say what I mean
    They're art to me

    I believe that negros and witches
    are real people too

    I believe that children
    can be wiser than their parents
    if their parents
    have their heads up their asses
    or voted Republican

    I
    masturbate
    often
    use contraceptives
    religiously
    waste my seed
    paint with semen
    walk around nude
    splay my wares
    share the wealth
    want a harem
    eye for an eye
    thou shalt not kill
    tooth for a tooth
    turn the other cheek
    live
    die
    swear
    lie
    beat off a dog
    covet my neighbor
    read Tolkien

    and want to

    have 35 babies,
    name them all after Bible characters,
    pray to God,
    and then drown them all [/B]

    Follow me and let the dead bury the dead.
    This isn't the land of opportunity, it's the land of competition.
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