Dirty Secrets..............................
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With anguish on my face
Knees worn through on my jeans
Fingers grasping at the air
Where you once stood
I face a door
Which was slammed in rage
Staring blankly at the door knob
Listening to remorse sing her song
Knees worn through on my jeans
Fingers grasping at the air
Where you once stood
I face a door
Which was slammed in rage
Staring blankly at the door knob
Listening to remorse sing her song
You've changed your place in this world!
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with anguish on my face
knees worn through my jeans
fingers grasp the air
where you stood (once is implied by the past tense anyway)
I face a door
slammed in rage
blank stares at the door knob
remorse sings her song
even the simple changes can make a world of difference
I like it...LISTENING TO REMORSE SING HER SONG....that part gets me.....
A whisper and a chill
adv2005
"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"
PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
Man is least himself when he talks in his own person. Give him a mask, and he will tell you the truth.
-Oscar Wilde
i like that part a lot, too. great poem!
he had a voice that was strong and loud and
i swallowed his facade cos i'm so
eager to identify with
someone above the crowd
someone who seemed to feel the same
someone prepared to lead the way