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All the money, not another minute buy................

even flow?even flow? Posts: 8,066
edited August 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
"I thought there might be a miracle"
Silly human beings we are
As the good life slips
We turn our heads
Always hoping, wanting the best
For ourselves and our children
As I see you lying there
A days work to go from
Your bed to the kitchen
And to push yourself back
Lonliness, is your major complaint
As being alone and wasting away
Must be torture
The curtain has fallen
Yet, the actress hasn't left the stage
You've changed your place in this world!
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  • violet rayviolet ray Posts: 502
    i came across a miracle once,
    but it ended up belonging to someone else
    You ask me to enter
    But then You make me crawl
    And I can't be holding on
    To what You got
    When all You've got is hurt
    ----
    Underneath this smile lies everything
    All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    I know, it's hard, babe! :( The tenderness you have for your Ma is really touching. This one made me cry. We'll have another Swiss Chalet day soon. ;):)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    really, even

    a beautiful piece
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    NIce...evenflow....

    Now...who gave you permission to write about me?:)
    Loneliness is best left to the higher power as to why...


    I liked this peom a lot...especially the "actress" part!!!!!!

    signed,
    a love lost actress:)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
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