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Good-bye cruel, very cruel world........

even flow?even flow? Posts: 8,066
edited December 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Majestic unicorn
What you, must have looked like
Flowing mane
Strut; like a cock
Ferries
Tales
Extinction
Like the rhino
To be
And the narwhale
Of the sea
You've changed your place in this world!
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  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    :) I like that you likened the magical, mystical unicorn to the rhino and the narwhale....kinda like they're decendants of the unicorn. I love it! :) And you said "strut, like a cock (until I'm ninety nine, I'm gonna walk like a man...":D) and it didn't sound dirty or anything!!! ;)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • even flow?even flow? Posts: 8,066
    Being Enlightened wrote:
    :) I like that you likened the magical, mystical unicorn to the rhino and the narwhale....kinda like they're decendants of the unicorn. I love it! :) And you said "strut, like a cock (until I'm ninety nine, I'm gonna walk like a man...":D) and it didn't sound dirty or anything!!! ;)


    If it were the golden years of this place, I may have used a penis as a reference with the rhino, narwhale and unicorn. ;)
    You've changed your place in this world!
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    even flow? wrote:
    If it were the golden years of this place, I may have used a penis as a reference with the rhino, narwhale and unicorn. ;)

    :D Hmmm, I'd like to discuss this reference a little further. We can do that later, over dessert. ;)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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