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BalkiBalki Posts: 50
edited December 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Step to the beat
Everyones shoes...worn
My shoes....new

Step to the beat
Tired eyes...no color
My eyes....life

Step to the beat
Fake smiles...love?
My smiles...true

Step to the beat
Stay close to the pack
Or choose to wander
And see the world
"Don't Be Ridiculous"
~Balki Bartokamous

"Some people have taken pure bullshit, and turned it into gold."
~Neil

"Call out the instigators, because there's something in the air..."
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  • coleencoleen Posts: 938
    that was nice balki - i liked it.

    i don't think anyone would ever accuse you of stepping to the beat though - well except maybe with the pj step team :)
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Step back
    Take a look around

    Hearing without a sound

    Wander away, happy wanderer! :D
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • Radar(Baba)O'RileyRadar(Baba)O'Riley Posts: 947
    Pity the Bee Gees didn't include that on their Saturday Night Fever soundtrack.
  • phoebephoebe Posts: 25
    awwww that's my Balki... mr. poet himself.
    The greatness of a nation and its moral progress can be judged by the way its animals are treated.
    -Mahatma Gandhi
  • Trey PistachioTrey Pistachio Posts: 5
    phoebe wrote:
    awwww that's my Balki... mr. poet himself.


    no, phebes, that's MY balki.
    The do-do-do-dah-dah, The TREY-let
  • Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,265
    Did you ever read Gwendolyn Brooks' "We Real Cool" - your poem's flow reminds me of it.
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
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