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Out Of the Blue

MeddleDealMeddleDeal Posts: 2,547
edited September 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Out of the blue I said
'do i mean nothing to you?'
he said 'i do'

action speaks louder than words,
as they always say,
Can you really tell me that and look me in the eye?

I listen and go along w/it,
Cannot think of it,
Just let it be
I just want to be me

out of the blue I said these things,
and now I think

~**~
sorry guys, i wrote this like NOW and i apologize for it's suckness. Just got bored at work and decided to do a spur of the moment poem. I am just a beginner:)

thanks for reading it.
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~*STONEY PONY all the WAY!*~
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~~*~*~
"For the world, not for the war"-Neil Finn
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Comments

  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    I actually really like it. I can FEEL it. Thanks for sharing it.
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  • KwyjiboKwyjibo Posts: 662
    yeah, sometimes poems that are written like out of real emotion are powerful, even if they are simple
    The most remarkable thing about you standing in the doorway, is that its you, and that you're standing in the doorway.

    I write down good reasons to freeze to death in my spiral ring notebook. But in the long tresses of your hair--I am a babbling brook.
  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    Way to go, Nadi Pie <3
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

    www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
  • MeddleDealMeddleDeal Posts: 2,547
    aww thanks guys. I have to really start writing when I need to get things out...i have another one, but it is not finished yet:)

    thanks grooveamatic that my poem made you feel...I am truly honored by your kind words. *HUGS*
    ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~
    ~*STONEY PONY all the WAY!*~
    ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~~*~*~
    "For the world, not for the war"-Neil Finn
  • fitzyfitzy Posts: 20
    oooh found it hahaha :) lovely!!
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