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Troubled Man

MeddleDealMeddleDeal Posts: 2,547
edited August 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
A note, I wrote this about my first, online relationship, which was a TOTAL disaster. This one was written about him.
~*~*~
I'm tired of your decit and lies,
Why don't you fuck off and die?

Leave me alone,
Why don't you just leave me alone?
And let me be

You keep coming with excuses on why we couldn't be together,
First you tell me I could tell the world,
And then you say "no"

You continue to tell me that you love me,
But how can I believe you
when you tell me to keep it on the downlow?

You've got problems,
You've got issues,
You're a man with no direction

When i wanted to talk,
you told me I was 'fucking pissing you off and this was the last straw'

Said didn't want a relationship,
Well, you were in one with me,
Denied it all and left to be with your wife,
Have a good life!
ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~
~*STONEY PONY all the WAY!*~
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~~*~*~
"For the world, not for the war"-Neil Finn
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  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Bleh, sounds like a shitty experience but I'm sure you've learned and are the better for it. :) Hey, at least you got this poem out of it! :) It's a good release to write out those angry feelings.

    When I went back and read it over again, I looked at this line and giggled 'cause I changed a word since it was an online thing-"But how can I believe you when you tell me to keep it on the DOWNLOAD?" :D
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • trappedinmyradiotrappedinmyradio Posts: 1,189
    i think this is a good indication of how you can use writing as a therapeutic tool. and, also, a measuring stick for where you started and where you came to be.
    I'll dig a tunnel
    from my window to yours
  • MeddleDealMeddleDeal Posts: 2,547
    Being Enlightened wrote:
    When I went back and read it over again, I looked at this line and giggled 'cause I changed a word since it was an online thing-"But how can I believe you when you tell me to keep it on the DOWNLOAD?" :D

    :p That is funny!! Maybe I SHOULD change that. hahaha. damn online relationships...they really don't work for me! haha.

    trappedinmyradio...i agree w/you. I have a composition of all my poems, from when I started writing them last year, some of them I copied from loose papers in my old notebooks back in high school. I often look at my writings and wonder 'gee, this sucks' or 'hmm, maybe I should have changed some things' but it is a wonderful way to look at how much you have changed. I really like writing and i love sharing it w/you guys!! You guys are truly too kind! I love you all!!:)
    ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~
    ~*STONEY PONY all the WAY!*~
    ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~~*~*~
    "For the world, not for the war"-Neil Finn
  • violet rayviolet ray Posts: 502
    damn....
    ....
    You ask me to enter
    But then You make me crawl
    And I can't be holding on
    To what You got
    When all You've got is hurt
    ----
    Underneath this smile lies everything
    All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    such brutal honesty in commendable:)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
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