~Hurting~

MeddleDealMeddleDeal Posts: 2,547
edited September 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
A side note, I wrote this back in Texas, the day before my boyfriend left back to California. We knew it was going to end as soon as he left.:( We were on a break and then we just broke up. But we are still good friends :)
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Lovers parting,
As we go on our seperate ways,
Will our paths cross someday?
I don't know

We each hold our destiny in our two hands,
Eagerly awaiting for the next big change

Days will go by,
As the pain will subside,
I'll grown accustom to the numb,
While you move on with your life.

Whereas we were only a few hours away,
Now we will be states apart,
Never knowing the possibility of your return

'Everything happens for a reason,'
We both know

You'll keep me,
And I'll keep you in our hearts,
That's the way it'll be
ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~
~*STONEY PONY all the WAY!*~
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~~*~*~
"For the world, not for the war"-Neil Finn
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  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    I'm sure most people have been through this at some time or other. Thank you for sharing.
  • that was really good nadia, what else are you hiding? You know i love you and i hope that you posting this now doesnt mean you're feeling badly about things right now. I'm here for you if you need someone, but again, nice poem.

    love,
    lil' bro
    -one thing to remember, always have a good time, all the time
  • MeddleDealMeddleDeal Posts: 2,547
    I'm sure most people have been through this at some time or other. Thank you for sharing.

    yeah, that is why i decided to share it.:) It is good to get my writings out in the open..it has been awhile since I had this at my friend's place :o

    Thank U for reading and responding to this :)
    ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~
    ~*STONEY PONY all the WAY!*~
    ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~~*~*~
    "For the world, not for the war"-Neil Finn
  • MeddleDealMeddleDeal Posts: 2,547
    that was really good nadia, what else are you hiding? You know i love you and i hope that you posting this now doesnt mean you're feeling badly about things right now. I'm here for you if you need someone, but again, nice poem.

    love,
    lil' bro

    Awww Kevin, I am okay...seriously, I am. :) I just felt like posting it and sharing my poem w/everyone else:)

    *HUGS* i love you lil' bro!
    ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~
    ~*STONEY PONY all the WAY!*~
    ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~~*~*~
    "For the world, not for the war"-Neil Finn
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    OOps. Sorry! Nice poem by the way.
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