slow day at work today...i'll be quiet soon

coleencoleen Posts: 938
edited September 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
we stand
on opposite sides
holding up the same
mirror shouting
at one another
look at you
look at you
SEE HOW YOU ARE

we retreat
in our shared defeat
dreaming
of tangled fingers
warm lips
whispered kisses
aching hearts

remembering
diamonds upon the current
smiling for us
in our beds
dancing in dreams
between good mornings
and sweet dreams

building homes
hearth
life in our hearts
a future
so close
we could feel it
and eternity
growing within us

i haven't
the strength or the daring
to guess
anymore
if ever you could have allowed
just a little of the truth
in you
to be as vulnerable
as you expected me to be
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Comments

  • don't be quiet...
    You ask me to enter
    But then You make me crawl
    And I can't be holding on
    To what You got
    When all You've got is hurt
    ----
    Underneath this smile lies everything
    All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
  • coleencoleen Posts: 938
    thanks violet for indulging my little outburst today. :D
  • i think you write really well,
    and i've had times where i could relate to a lot of what you said.

    keep posting, please!

    :)
    You ask me to enter
    But then You make me crawl
    And I can't be holding on
    To what You got
    When all You've got is hurt
    ----
    Underneath this smile lies everything
    All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
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