axl rose...the resurrection ;)

coleencoleen Posts: 938
edited February 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
last night
a ghost of a life
long passed visited me
axl rose
a bit paunchier
a smile that slipped
across his face a bit more easily
and with a sincerity
that i suppose we sometimes
come to in our age

he had developed a graciousness
and a willingness to
be open that i can't say i remember
from the wild flame haired
blazing tongued
vicious spirit
that he'd been when i was just a kid
i wonder why he chose me
one silly little girl out of a legion
of broken hearts he left in his wake

all the same he
allowed me to make peace with the past
peace with what he'd meant to me
and laid to rest were all the questions
that have been a decade long hang-over
from my life back then

for me he was the soundtrack
to a time when i'd had the world
and never had the sense to realize it
he was there with me when i lost
them all - the friends that were closer than kin
and he was there when i lost the girl i can never become
because of my own stupidity

he hung his head in defeat
watching his power over the world he'd made his own
die as a result of his selfishness
and insecurity
watched as i embraced something
other than self
we two had been so similar then
so self involved
clinging too tightly to a life
that we choked the spirit from
i hope that it hadn't taken him
so long as it took me to realize
where we went wrong

if only dreaming dreams were a way
to transmute the truth
i'd find a way into the dreams of axl rose
to give him the peace
that his visit
brought to me.
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Comments

  • Awww, coleen!!!! :) That was really sweet! Gosh, he was the soundtrack to my young and crazy life too. You've paid homage so kindly to him, probably much kinder than he deserves! :D;) Thanks for that, {{coleen}}!
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • eMMIeMMI Posts: 6,262
    this is really good!! :) some time ago G'n'R/Axl was my soundtrack too.. helped me get through to be the girl I am now. gosh, how long has it been? maybe some over a year, if even that.. :o
    I should dig up my CDs. :D

    thank you very much for sharing this. :)
    "Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
  • coleencoleen Posts: 938
    many thanks to emmi & be for your time and for going back...WAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYY back with me.

    axl sends his regards. tee hee :D
  • coleen wrote:
    many thanks to emmi & be for your time and for going back...WAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYY back with me.

    axl sends his regards. tee hee :D

    LOL! Yeah, I know, we're starting to shwo our age, aren't we? LOL! Man, 21 sure feels old, huh????? HA HA HA HA HA HA HA!!! :p:p:p (21 and some months, that is ;))

    Huh, what? Axl? Where? *adjusts bra, checks breath, fixes hair...* *snicker, snicker* :D
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • eMMIeMMI Posts: 6,262
    coleen wrote:
    many thanks to emmi & be for your time and for going back...WAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYY back with me.

    axl sends his regards. tee hee :D

    no probs. :D though I perhaps didn't go back that much. :p (since I was what 16-17 when I really had the Axl time in my life and that was some 1-2 years ago. :) )

    really? Axl? reagrds? me? *blush* :o

    :D
    "Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
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