I wish it was you

VEDHEAD27VEDHEAD27 Posts: 3,091
edited April 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
It frustrating
how much you occupy my mind
and if you were to search my heart
you would find
an empty space, that only you can fill
a bleeding wound
that only you can heal
I realize this is a love that cannot be
but at the same time...
why can't I feel free?!
Letting go is so hard to do
I really wish it was you
Why can't it be you?
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"Lo√e, you know the word
...YOU invented it!" ~ E√

¤º°`°º¤ø,¸¸,ø¤º°`°º¤ø,¸¸,ø¤
...::STONE--YOU--OWN!::...
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  • MeddleDealMeddleDeal Posts: 2,547
    Lydi, my dear, reading that, brought a tear to my eye:( Beautiful lyrics girl, and you know it comes from the heart. Having something there that you know you can't possibly have right now.:(

    hella sad. *HUGS*
    ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~
    ~*STONEY PONY all the WAY!*~
    ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~~*~*~
    "For the world, not for the war"-Neil Finn
  • VEDHEAD27VEDHEAD27 Posts: 3,091
    :(

    Thanks Nadi. I just really wanted to get that out. It definitely helps.

    *hugs*
    ¤º°`°º¤ø,¸¸,ø¤º°`°º¤ø,¸¸,ø¤

    "Lo√e, you know the word
    ...YOU invented it!" ~ E√

    ¤º°`°º¤ø,¸¸,ø¤º°`°º¤ø,¸¸,ø¤
    ...::STONE--YOU--OWN!::...
    ••••••••••••••••••••••••••••
  • MeddleDealMeddleDeal Posts: 2,547
    yeah i know what you mean my dear.

    Writing just helps get your thoughts out and help you out. I know it has helped me out a lot recently. I mean, you NEED to get your feelings out there one way or another and not hold anything back in. Good to see you writing such lovely poetry girl:) I am SO proud of you:)
    ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~
    ~*STONEY PONY all the WAY!*~
    ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~~*~*~
    "For the world, not for the war"-Neil Finn
  • OH MY GOD....I am only randomly choosing threads but every time I find something i can relate to.Great poem,hope to see more
    "why on earth are we here?,
    surely not to live in pain and fear"-John Lennon
  • That was really good. Made me wanna cry. I feel exactly the same way right now.
    There was a whole inside his soul a manicure couldn't fill. So he found himself a whore to love while daisies choked in the windowsill. *JK*
  • CBBootCBBoot Posts: 28
    that was good
    i don't need drugs to make my life tragic.....ev
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    I have felt like this before.
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