The Stranger I Once Knew

VEDHEAD27VEDHEAD27 Posts: 3,091
edited November 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
The Stranger I Once Knew

Who are you?
I can't see
just a distant memory
a tiny imprint on my soul
that reminds me wherever I go
of someone I once knew
you


I remember when
the candles flickered for you and I
the light inside you
shined so bright
it burned beauty
in all those you came in contact with


I always felt blessed
special
to just be within your powerful presence
that alone,
got me high
there was just this special thing about you
that light once again
it shined on others everywhere you'd go
you'd light up their skies
you'd make them believe
was I a fool to believe?


One on one
you had the gift
of making others truely feel like it was just you and them
the universe yours
every star yours
magic was possible
everything seemed possible


Slowly the lights dim
the stars fall
when she comes around
such a pity
how could a flame this strong
suddenly become so weak?
the light must have belonged to someone else
because when she's around
all you are,
all you'll remain,
is the stranger I once knew
lost to me
lost to yourself
lost to everyone else

the light finally goes out
in darkness
you shall remain
¤º°`°º¤ø,¸¸,ø¤º°`°º¤ø,¸¸,ø¤

"Lo√e, you know the word
...YOU invented it!" ~ E√

¤º°`°º¤ø,¸¸,ø¤º°`°º¤ø,¸¸,ø¤
...::STONE--YOU--OWN!::...
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  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    This was really good! I liked it alot. It flowed nicely and makes me wonder what happened to change the light. Thanks for writing that.
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • VEDHEAD27VEDHEAD27 Posts: 3,091
    Aww thanks twin1...and you are very welcome. :) I had to get it out. *sigh* Yes, I wonder that all the time. :/
    ¤º°`°º¤ø,¸¸,ø¤º°`°º¤ø,¸¸,ø¤

    "Lo√e, you know the word
    ...YOU invented it!" ~ E√

    ¤º°`°º¤ø,¸¸,ø¤º°`°º¤ø,¸¸,ø¤
    ...::STONE--YOU--OWN!::...
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  • Wow what a great poem Lydi!
    Its so eerie girl, but this poem totally reminds me of this guy I know!!

    I guess in a way we've all had this happen to us at one time or another...but it sucks nonetheless. :(
    "Rock and roll is something that can't be quantified, sometimes it's not even something you hear, but FEEL!" - Bob Lefsetz
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    I too liked this a lot. I've known people like that.
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    I like this one too.
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  • Great poem, little sister. :) I know exactly what you mean.

    ~peace~
    Never allow someone to be your Priority,
    While allowing yourself to be their Option.

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  • Nice to see some words from you, VEDHEAD27!!! :) I enjoyed this. It truly is a shame when you actually witness a bright light going out.
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • thaks for this one VEDHEAD....it tugged at me heartstrings.
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