poem I wrote 6 years ago

BinFrogBinFrog Posts: 7,309
edited December 2003 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
What I want and what I have,
both mock themselves before me.
Choose the truth or take a lie,
forging or conforming.
Strike the air and grasp the life,
or wait in halls of stone.
whisk away the bitter cries,
and mend your broken bones.
As light appears, don't take a bow,
don't even think its fair.
but walk a mile, breathing slow,
I'll try and meet you there.
Bright eyed kid: "Wow Typo Man, you're the best!"
Typo Man: "Thanks kidz, but remembir, stay in skool!"
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  • nocode198nocode198 Posts: 125
    Nice
    'Fox hunting is barbaric, the people who do it are a bunch of snobby tories with stupid posh accents. Oh damn, i didn't say that - damn, what a giveaway...'
  • coleencoleen Posts: 938
    thats beautiful...have any more?
  • BinFrogBinFrog Posts: 7,309
    These are all old mind you...


    Speck of the sky falls into a circle of white,
    trace the cries of today and laugh at the result.
    Away lies fear and anguish follows soon after,
    and innocence is a coward only to those who don't know.
    Droplets of simplicity sparkle in the sun,
    the advanced signs of weariness heed the way,
    risen from the ashes are remnants of synergy,
    and the eagle of time has flown its last dance.



    Innocence turns to consequence,
    begging lasts no more,
    and all that ever was to me,
    is nothing anymore.
    In fabricated truths of life,
    and decadence unmasked,
    there stands before me doors to choose
    unlocked, its still a task.
    Though bitterness has fallen,
    given way to thought and chance
    I raise my fist,
    I shake it loud,
    for this is my finest hour.


    I used to have one (still do?) on the "Poetry & Prose" section of Synergy from my old email address, slingfrog@aol.com
    Bright eyed kid: "Wow Typo Man, you're the best!"
    Typo Man: "Thanks kidz, but remembir, stay in skool!"
  • LauriLauri Posts: 748
    very nice words, though i can't even begin to understand what they mean.
  • dan_alivedan_alive Posts: 123
    that's damn great, binfrog... 6 years ago?? wow... well done.. i hope u still write :)
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  • coleencoleen Posts: 938
    thanks so much for sharing those with us. hopefully we'll see more from you in the future.

    my favorite are the original poem you posted and the last one in the second post. really great.
  • "my favorite are the original poem you posted and the last one in the second post. really great."

    I agree. Good work Binfrog.
    I don't have to sell my soul, he's already in me

    If you've lost your faith in love and music the end won't be long
  • Originally posted by BinFrog
    and innocence is a coward only to those who don't know.



    (:





    innocence needs karate lessons






    .
    Nosotros nunca escuchamos la voz adentro
  • Nicely written.
    Makes much more sense to live in the Present Tense.
  • seekitseekit Posts: 73
    wow i love what you wrote, i'm up early and new to the pit so I thought i'd go back and get schooled..............
    Seek It
  • how old were you when these were written? they're quite good!
    There have been shows where maybe the whole first half of the show my eyes have been closed. and then you'll look out in the crowd and there'll be somebody totally lost in their head, in exactly the same place you're in. That, to me, is the essence of music

    ~Jeff Ament
  • beautiful
    "Trying to be a person you're not is a waste of the person you really are."- Kurt D. Cobain (R.I.P February 20, 1967- April 5, 1994, we love u Kurt)



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