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Schlitz

I’m ready to write
The cursor is blinking
So much emotion to be said
Heart is bleeding
Don’t know what to say
I’ll just keep typing
Sorry if this is a ramble
I need to do this
It helps me to handle
Let me carry on
I’m sure you all don’t care
Cause I know the numb
What’s a smile
A facade if you will
Or a look to my past
If only you knew

Ever look at that keyboard and think
Tomorrow I’ll be writing in ink
Trembling hand and forgetting my last name
Smile cause you can
Cursed cause it’s a given
Cry cause it’s forgotten
Learn cause it’s not taught
Hold what is given
Shame on those that our forsaken
A life of love equals a life of hate
I believe nothing more and nothing less

I’m one that is shamed
I’d rather be damned
Then live where I am
I’ve lost my upper hand
Such reflection
I’m now out or words

rise above

good, sass!

i relate to that last paragraph.

Pacomc79

Originally posted by Schlitz
I’m sure you all don’t care

I think anyone who's been in love and lost it can relate to that. Closure is in name only. Pain never goes away it just hurts less frequently. The only part I have a problem with is that one.

I think there are a lot of people who care and care a lot. It's just tough to notice it sometimes because we get preoccupied with the hurt. Everybody needs and deserves time to heal. I like the way you are getting your feelings out. Biting. True. Lots of feeling. It's amazing how far a kind word and a hug can go. I never was too good at hating people even when they deserve it.

Swan

That was amazing.

stickboy

see?
I told you people care!
don't underestimate love baby.
Otherwise, great stuff. You know that already!

stickboy

Originally posted by Schlitz
I’m ready to write
The cursor is blinking
So much emotion to be said
Heart is bleeding
Don’t know what to say
I’ll just keep typing
Sorry if this is a ramble
I need to do this
It helps me to handle
Let me carry on
I’m sure you all don’t care
Cause I know the numb
What’s a smile
A facade if you will
Or a look to my past
If only you knew

Ever look at that keyboard and think
Tomorrow I’ll be writing in ink
Trembling hand and forgetting my last name
Smile cause you can
Cursed cause it’s a given
Cry cause it’s forgotten
Learn cause it’s not taught
Hold what is given
Shame on those that our forsaken
A life of love equals a life of hate
I believe nothing more and nothing less

I’m one that is shamed
I’d rather be damned
Then live where I am
I’ve lost my upper hand
Such reflection
I’m now out or words

thiis my response and what came to mind soon as I read it:


Your outpour I feel
Like a sponge, absorbed in my head
your heart bleeds
like a bandage, I help you to mend
you're left speechless
it's ok, words needn't be said
your need to do this
i definitely understand
carry on
and I'll hold your hand
I assure you, we care
I feel your numbness and despair
your smile, your reflection
I see and feel your past
Damn, If only I knew

dropping keyboard
I use pen and pad
my mind racing
and my hand pacing
trying to keep up
I smile cause you make me
cursed cause I allow it
I cry cause i feel
Learn what is not taught
Hold all that is given
shame on us all, for we're all guilty
believe nothing less
A life full of love
equals a life of contentness


Baby, don't be ashamed
and keep your head up
love where you live
for when the time comes
You'll have so much to offer
and so much to give.
Home is where your heart is
so heres to you luv,
so lets crack another schlitz!


CHEERS BABY!

Schlitz

thank you Eli