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still here

SchlitzSchlitz Posts: 141
edited February 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
More thoughts to come
Always in my mind
They don’t leave they torture
Still here
Painful yet painless
Black shadows of hate
My hair tickles my face while I think
I see light through my veins
Opening and closing
I wonder how deep my skin is
It looks see easy
Just a quick flick and life is no more
A route not to be taken cause I still hold faith
A faith I’ve lacked
One that thirsts me at night
I won’t call it hope
For it is not mine
Just shades of denial
So quick they leap to hold me
Thank you for keeping me awake
i have to remain at top sassiness, even though my inner sass is struggling
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  • JDE-PJJDE-PJ Posts: 721
    a route not to be taken indeed, kelly please if you ever lose that faith you mentioned, talk to your family and friends.

    this is good but very dark, keep on writing, ok?
    I know someday you will have a beautiful Life


    Jason
  • coleencoleen Posts: 938
    Originally posted by JDE-PJ
    a route not to be taken indeed, kelly please if you ever lose that faith you mentioned, talk to your family and friends.

    this is good but very dark, keep on writing, ok?

    i couldn't agree more with everything you said here.

    keep writing schlitz, i'll be looking for you.
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