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Another one by me

SchlitzSchlitz Posts: 141
edited February 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Hold my hand out and catch a snowflake on my finger
Quickly bring it to my face
I know I’ll be the only one to see it’s fallen art
I watch it melt
Taste the now drop of water that everyone sees

Snaps off a small limb of an ice coated tree
Feels the smoothness of the rough limb
Memorizing the color of dead
Tosses it away knowing it will never grow

Looks around sees a puddle of ice
Stabs it with the heel of my boot
A broken reflection
Keeps walking even though my toes are numb
i have to remain at top sassiness, even though my inner sass is struggling
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  • even flow?even flow? Posts: 8,066
    The "sass" veturing into the poetry section with two good reads. What? What? What?
    You've changed your place in this world!
  • puremagicpuremagic Posts: 1,907
    How sad but nice. Another side of the sass.

    Originally posted by Schlitz
    Hold my hand out and catch a snowflake on my finger
    Quickly bring it to my face
    I know I’ll be the only one to see it’s fallen art
    I watch it melt
    Taste the now drop of water that everyone sees

    Snaps off a small limb of an ice coated tree
    Feels the smoothness of the rough limb
    Memorizing the color of dead
    Tosses it away knowing it will never grow

    Looks around sees a puddle of ice
    Stabs it with the heel of my boot
    A broken reflection
    Keeps walking even though my toes are numb
    SIN EATERS--We take the moral excrement we find in this equation and we bury it down deep inside of us so that the rest of our case can stay pure. That is the job. We are morally indefensible and absolutely necessary.
  • SoLATisASoLATisA Posts: 215
    there could be a schlitz poetry book soon, with this sudden burst of awesome poems...
  • browneyedgrlbrowneyedgrl Posts: 39
    " I know I'll be the only one to see it's fallen art.."

    great line in a beautiful poem:)
  • mulacmulac Posts: 97
    i really enjoyed this poem

    what is "sass"?
    the passenger is life
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