yeah

SchlitzSchlitz Posts: 141
edited March 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Well the facts that time me
Seem so small
As I feel
I cradle msyelf into a ball
Quite simply I’m in peace
My knees in a close up
I forget the world
Gone for good
Just black spots of light
My eyelids see




Yeah know when you do close them and just keep looking at those spots it’s just a feeling of letting go. Really - the lights of those flashes amaze me….sometimes stars sometimes hate yet still love. As much as I can vent as much as I can keep going on about these things I’m still amazed about the light behind my lids. Those ones that make me so bitter yet still here and still here again but yet hungry. It really is an experience when you do really close them and look at those flashing memories. Sweet release sweet love sweet everything.

It’s not so bad.
i have to remain at top sassiness, even though my inner sass is struggling
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  • SoLATisASoLATisA Posts: 215
    you truly are an artist. your writings always describe things i feel and see but never comprehend or could put into words.... you make me feel like i'm not alone... schlitz, please keep these writings coming,, some make me happy, others make me sad,,, but all invoke emotions.. hardly any writings ever do, but yours always do

    :D you're also such a cool person to talk to
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