Traces

SchlitzSchlitz Posts: 141
Lose my body
Be my silhouette
Let me trace a finger
Outlining it
Give my your finger
I want to taste it
Do you taste what I do?
Cause it’s my soul
Can you describe it?
I want to know what you think
I can’t
It tastes like swirls of memories
Dizziness of coming thoughts
Invading my sheltered mouth
I can’t breathe
Licking my taste from your thoughts
I’m drowning on your eyes relaying
What are you saying?
Those are pools that move the room
Not me
Background noise is not known
Yet I hear it
Trembling isn’t the word
Sweaty palms grasp
Stop it, don’t find me
i have to remain at top sassiness, even though my inner sass is struggling
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  • that's really good, as usual. :)
    i suggest you step out on your porch
    run away my son...see it all...oh see the world
  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    Originally posted by Schlitz
    Lose my body
    Be my silhouette
    Let me trace a finger
    Outlining it
    Give my your finger
    I want to taste it
    Do you taste what I do?
    Cause it’s my soul
    Can you describe it?
    I want to know what you think
    I can’t
    It tastes like swirls of memories
    Dizziness of coming thoughts
    Invading my sheltered mouth
    I can’t breathe
    Licking my taste from your thoughts
    I’m drowning on your eyes relaying
    What are you saying?
    Those are pools that move the room
    Not me
    Background noise is not known
    Yet I hear it
    Trembling isn’t the word
    Sweaty palms grasp
    Stop it, don’t find me

    troubled eloquence. graceful chaos.

    just my kind of poetry, kells. :)
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

    www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
  • SwanSwan Posts: 350
    this is too good NOT to be at the top
    I'm the only Hell Mama ever raised.
  • SchlitzSchlitz Posts: 141
    Originally posted by Miracle
    this is too good NOT to be at the top

    ;)
    i have to remain at top sassiness, even though my inner sass is struggling
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