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SchlitzSchlitz Posts: 141
edited July 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
After glow of love
Beauty of tears

Hurt of those loss
Knowing they are safe now

Fresh scent of sweat
Aw you earned it

Closing of your eyes to take it in
A sweet smile of that thought

Hair caressed
Goosebumps of sensation

Slight touch of your back
A knowing look I’m yours

Sweet giggles of life
Life letting you giggle

Handshake of confidence
Pride you achieved it

Making someone laugh
Shine in your eyes

Let me hear more…
i have to remain at top sassiness, even though my inner sass is struggling
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  • nothingman44nothingman44 Posts: 1,495
    that was nice kelly! ;)
  • oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
    the smile in your voice
    love's moments are sublime

    the breath of summer
    wild flowers in bright fields

    sass lifts her eyes
    leaves us breathless in wonder
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    Kell Kell. That was SOO beautiful. Moments that are precious. Moments that are few.

    *mwah!*
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

    www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
  • SchlitzSchlitz Posts: 141
    Originally posted by olderman
    the smile in your voice
    love's moments are sublime

    the breath of summer
    wild flowers in bright fields

    sass lifts her eyes
    leaves us breathless in wonder

    Keep em coming. that was lovely.

    thanks Jessie poo!
    i have to remain at top sassiness, even though my inner sass is struggling
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