the venom of adam and eve

windedsailor
windedsailor Posts: 98
edited September 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
i'm just sitting here thinking about things,
and the venom of adam and eve
you may argue that all was well
and things happened as they did,
but there was the venom
of adam and eve

don't get me wrong: shit happens
was it the poison of adam or eve?

LOL
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  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Zero Eden's twisted metal trees
    of lies gnarl in the dust, and in the weak
    gauze of flailing, choking white, a breeze
    of fatty flies come, hungry for the bleak
    blooded shock eyes of the dispossessed:
    Adam and Eve, in captors' flags half dressed.
  • DopeBeastie
    DopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    shit happens indeed
    as did adam and eve
    find themselves in a garden
    with a particular tree

    and as any good child
    would do in the twilight
    sunk teeth into life's light
    and birds into bees

    and they knew they'd found holy
    the love and the smoke
    a happy trade lucky
    in living for broke
  • windedsailor
    windedsailor Posts: 98
    i'm surprised that anyone responded to this, i think it was adam's fault.

    not that anyone should be blamed, of course.
  • windedsailor
    windedsailor Posts: 98
    Originally posted by FinsburyParkCarrots
    Zero Eden's twisted metal trees
    of lies gnarl in the dust, and in the weak
    gauze of flailing, choking white, a breeze
    of fatty flies come, hungry for the bleak
    blooded shock eyes of the dispossessed:
    Adam and Eve, in captors' flags half dressed.

    DUDE.
  • DopeBeastie
    DopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    Originally posted by windedsailor
    i'm surprised that anyone responded to this, i think it was adam's fault.

    not that anyone should be blamed, of course.

    no... blame would be inappropriate here
    gosh, do they even have sex in heaven?

    forgive my distraction
    I'm on my way :)


    k22

    me-o


    nice to see you all over the place, sailor... enjoy the weekend :)
  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Originally posted by PastaNazi
    no... blame would be inappropriate here
    gosh, do they even have sex in heaven?


    Er, well, they did in Eden, allegedly.

    As for celestial lovemaking, and according to Doris Stokes (the late medium), John Lennon was getting it on with Carole Lombard, last time she contacted him.
  • windedsailor
    windedsailor Posts: 98
    Originally posted by PastaNazi
    no... blame would be inappropriate here
    gosh, do they even have sex in heaven?

    forgive my distraction
    I'm on my way :)


    k22

    me-o


    nice to see you all over the place, sailor... enjoy the weekend :)

    thank you...i think i already had my weekend. big smile.
  • windedsailor
    windedsailor Posts: 98
    Originally posted by FinsburyParkCarrots
    Er, well, they did in Eden, allegedly.

    As for celestial lovemaking, and according to Doris Stokes (the late medium), John Lennon was getting it on with Carole Lombard, last time she contacted him.

    that's too good. LOL

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