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Lets make our own song...

petrocspetrocs Posts: 4,342
edited October 2008 in Other Music
I'll start and keep your response to a maximum of 8 words...if you call Chorus then please put "Chorus" in the subject line

Typical song structure please..

6-7 Lines for each verse
5 line chorus
4 verses

Once that is achieved we'll combine the song and we'll start a new song..If you name the song it must be voted on by 6 people. Come on people lets get some of those creativity juices flowing..and please lets not make this into a big joke

OK here is goes:

"Another moment in time lost to sorrow"



****UPDATE****

Verse 1:
Another moment in time lost to sorrow
Find myself wondering - will it be better tommorow?
Waverider on a sea of still uncried tears
Rushing thoughts of forgotten years
Some things just take more time

Verse 2:


Chorus:
Time is rare...too rare for me to seek
But time is relative to me
When I grow tired and weak
I find my comfort in the sea

Verse 3:


Verse 4:
Shows:
9/24/96 MD. 9/28/96 Randalls. 8/28-29/98 Camden. 9/8/98 NJ. 9/18/98 MD. 9/1-2/00 Camden. 9/4/00 MD. 4/28/03 Philly. 7/5-6/03 Camden. 9/30/05 AC.
10/3/05 Philly. 5/27-28/06 Camden. 6/23/06 Pitt. 6/19-20/08 Camden. 6/24/08 MSG. 8/7/08 EV Newark, NJ. 6/11-12/09 EV Philly, PA. 10/27-28-30-31/09 Philly, PA., 5/15/10 Hartford,5/17/10 Boston, 5/18/10 Newark, 5/20-21/10 MSG
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  • robowskirobowski Posts: 143
    "Another moment in time lost to sorrow"
    "Find myself wondering - will it be better Tommorow?"
    As you live your life in sometimes quiet desperation, facing adversity and tragedy: if you have hope and love, that mixture helps you overcome that tragedy and go on with the rest of your life.”
    --Jack Lengyel
  • GetALifeGetALife Posts: 563
    Another moment in time lost to sorrow
    Find myself wondering - will it be better Tommorow?
    Waverider on a sea of still uncried tears
    2000: Hamburg
    2006: Berlin
    2007: Munich * Düsseldorf
    2009: Berlin * Manchester * London
    2010: Dublin * Belfast * Berlin
    2012: Amsterdam I & II * Berlin I & II * Stockholm * Oslo * Copenhagen
    EV 2012: Amsterdam I & II
    2014: Amsterdam I & II * Milan * Trieste * Vienna * Berlin
    EV 2017: Berlin
    2018: Amsterdam I & II * Prague * Krakow * Berlin
    2022: Berlin- Vienna - Prague - Amsterdam I - Amsterdam II #
    2024: Berlin I & II

    ~~~

    “It is curious that while good people go to great lengths to spare their children from suffering, few of them seem to notice that the one (and only) guaranteed way to prevent all the suffering of their children is not to bring those children into existence in the first place.”
    ― David Benatar - Better Never to Have Been: The Harm of Coming into Existence


  • i shit and i stinki shit and i stink Posts: 1,122
    GetALife wrote:
    Another moment in time lost to sorrow
    Find myself wondering - will it be better Tommorow?
    Waverider on a sea of still uncried tears
    some things just take more time
    we're all going to the same place...
  • i shit and i stinki shit and i stink Posts: 1,122
    Another moment in time lost to sorrow
    Find myself wondering - will it be better Tommorow?
    Waverider on a sea of still uncried tears
    Some things just take more time
    we're all going to the same place...
  • petrocspetrocs Posts: 4,342
    Another moment in time lost to sorrow
    Find myself wondering - will it be better tommorow?
    Waverider on a sea of still uncried tears
    Rushing thoughts of forgotten years
    Some things just take more time

    Verse 1 complete!
    Shows:
    9/24/96 MD. 9/28/96 Randalls. 8/28-29/98 Camden. 9/8/98 NJ. 9/18/98 MD. 9/1-2/00 Camden. 9/4/00 MD. 4/28/03 Philly. 7/5-6/03 Camden. 9/30/05 AC.
    10/3/05 Philly. 5/27-28/06 Camden. 6/23/06 Pitt. 6/19-20/08 Camden. 6/24/08 MSG. 8/7/08 EV Newark, NJ. 6/11-12/09 EV Philly, PA. 10/27-28-30-31/09 Philly, PA., 5/15/10 Hartford,5/17/10 Boston, 5/18/10 Newark, 5/20-21/10 MSG
  • Dismantle The SunDismantle The Sun Posts: 139
    Time is rare...too rare for me to seek
    Pack up the moon and dismantle the sun - W.H. Auden
  • mfc2006mfc2006 HTOWN Posts: 37,484
    Dismantle The Sun wrote:
    Time is rare...too rare for me to seek

    but time is relative to me
    I LOVE MUSIC.
    www.cluthelee.com
    www.cluthe.com
  • petrocspetrocs Posts: 4,342
    Time is rare...too rare for me to seek
    But time is relative to me
    When I grow tired and weak
    I find my comfort in the sea
    Shows:
    9/24/96 MD. 9/28/96 Randalls. 8/28-29/98 Camden. 9/8/98 NJ. 9/18/98 MD. 9/1-2/00 Camden. 9/4/00 MD. 4/28/03 Philly. 7/5-6/03 Camden. 9/30/05 AC.
    10/3/05 Philly. 5/27-28/06 Camden. 6/23/06 Pitt. 6/19-20/08 Camden. 6/24/08 MSG. 8/7/08 EV Newark, NJ. 6/11-12/09 EV Philly, PA. 10/27-28-30-31/09 Philly, PA., 5/15/10 Hartford,5/17/10 Boston, 5/18/10 Newark, 5/20-21/10 MSG
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