original song

armanHammer
armanHammer Posts: 471
edited July 2007 in Musicians and Gearheads
Riverside.. LA.. California. EV?
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  • Anon
    Anon Posts: 11,175
    *Bumpty Bump*

    Just listened to this, i like it. Really cool.
  • ianvomsaal
    ianvomsaal Suncoast, FL Posts: 1,224
    For the "Song In Progress" I'd loose the backward stuff (as it makes it sound kind of muttled, & not quite
    as musical or melodic as it could be). But keep working on it, I'm sure you'll have it worked out in no time.
    Remember, songs don't always come together in one sitting (they sometimes take a while to congeal).
    You've got a good start, so take your time and let it flow.
    Cheers . . .

    - Ian
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  • exhausted
    exhausted Posts: 6,638
    i'd agree that the reverse stuff is detracting a bit right now. maybe pull the main guitar closer to centre and lower the volume of the reverse stuff for now.