Thought I would share some lyrics I wrote yesterday

House53

what do you think it is about? to me it is obvious, but I wonder if my message is conveyed effectively. thanks

> LIES
>
> They did it again, They did it again
> Pushin' their brand of freedom
> They did it again
>
> We're takin' it in, We're takin' it in
> Eatin' up the bullshit
> We're takin' it in
>
> Lies, straight faced
> Lies, unblinking
> Lies, costing lives
> Lies... to our face
>
> The Cowboy rides, That Cowboy rides
> across the dessert to his prize
> The f*ckin' Cowboy rides
>
> The bullets fly, those bullets fly
> breakin hearts, makin' mothers cry
> the goddamn bullets fly
>
> Lies, straight faced
> Lies, unblinking
> Lies, costing lives
> Lies... to our face
>
> When will we see... all of this cannot be free
> When will we stop and make amends
> When will we see... all of this is not free
> When will we stop and make amends
>
> Alright!!
>
> guitar solo
>
> The tide it's Changin', the tide is Changin'
> New voices bein' heard
> the tide is changin'
>
> The feelin hits me, the feelin' hits me
> Now's the time for me to be heard
> The feelin hits me
>
> Lies, straight faced
> Lies, unblinking
> Lies, costing lives
> Lies... to our face

Pacomc79

good, nice flow. I get riffs in my head from it.

House53

Me too, but my amp is at our practice space... it is hard for me to write riffs on an acoustic and really feel them.

I need to get a 112 to keep at home and just move my head back and forth.

I need to write some music for it though...

who's_pearljam?

Originally posted by House53
Me too, but my amp is at our practice space... it is hard for me to write riffs on an acoustic and really feel them.

I need to get a 112 to keep at home and just move my head back and forth.

I need to write some music for it though...

Nice.

Yeah, I'm not getting that bedtime lullaby feel from it! That one gets cranked up!
Maybe the 200 watt hiwatt instead of the 112!