Please critique my music

anticreed

If u listen to one song i thought "wasted youth" is the best sounding. But anyways ive been playing guitar and writing songs for bout a year i think, and id like to know what i could do to improve or something im doing wrong, or right...Any feedback is appreciated

http://www.geocities.com/jonavan88

OR

http://www.cornerband.com/html/bandPage/bandPage.asp?band_id=1032623

the 2nd one should work if the 1st one didnt, sry bout that

nailz100

I can't open any of your tunes for some reason?

anticreed

i edited my post, they should be working now