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a love song

Bad RadioBad Radio Posts: 30
edited April 2004 in Musicians and Gearheads
would any of you guys mind rating the love song i wrote? its your basic G D C chord progression.
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  • riotact114riotact114 Posts: 31
    ok lets hear it
    Let it wash away
    All those yesterdays
  • Bad RadioBad Radio Posts: 30
    i took a long time about someone very special to me...

    saw you the other day
    still thinkin bout the things i didnt say

    you looked so pretty dressed in blue
    oh, the things i wanted to do to you...



    like...

    pull the moles right off your skin
    then shoot an omellete on your chin

    take i bite out of your left breast
    then take a shit right on your chest

    use your hair to mop the floor
    make you tell your dad that your a whore

    smack you till your black and blue
    have you wipe my ass when i am through



    you'll never know what you mean to me
    the perfect couple we could be
    with a little attention you would see
    a softer side of me....
  • puremagicpuremagic Posts: 1,907
    Originally posted by Bad Radio
    i took a long time about someone very special to me...

    saw you the other day
    still thinkin bout the things i didnt say

    you looked so pretty dressed in blue
    oh, the things i wanted to do to you...



    like...

    pull the moles right off your skin
    then shoot an omellete on your chin

    take i bite out of your left breast
    then take a shit right on your chest

    use your hair to mop the floor
    make you tell your dad that your a whore

    smack you till your black and blue
    have you wipe my ass when i am through



    you'll never know what you mean to me
    the perfect couple we could be
    with a little attention you would see
    a softer side of me....

    Wow, I'm glad the person was special to you, otherwise I couldn't image all the love pouring out from this song.
    SIN EATERS--We take the moral excrement we find in this equation and we bury it down deep inside of us so that the rest of our case can stay pure. That is the job. We are morally indefensible and absolutely necessary.
  • Bad RadioBad Radio Posts: 30
    yeah, its a real tear jerker
  • puremagicpuremagic Posts: 1,907
    Originally posted by Bad Radio
    yeah, its a real tear jerker

    I read that and all I could think of was if I could rewrite it to some Pantera.
    SIN EATERS--We take the moral excrement we find in this equation and we bury it down deep inside of us so that the rest of our case can stay pure. That is the job. We are morally indefensible and absolutely necessary.
  • Bad RadioBad Radio Posts: 30
    nahhh its kinda a slow song, accoustic!
  • puremagicpuremagic Posts: 1,907
    Originally posted by Bad Radio
    nahhh its kinda a slow song, accoustic!

    Duh, I know your gave us the chords, but the words makes me want to take it in a different direction, that's all I was saying.
    SIN EATERS--We take the moral excrement we find in this equation and we bury it down deep inside of us so that the rest of our case can stay pure. That is the job. We are morally indefensible and absolutely necessary.
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