listen to my band

warehousewarehouse Posts: 124
edited April 2005 in Musicians and Gearheads
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We are a rock band from canada...any comments, consructive criticism are welcome. The song is not mastered or anything. Anyways i play guitar and 4/5 of the band are huge pj fans. Thanks
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  • The ManThe Man Posts: 15
    hey pretty good song, but where was the solo? but thats the only real thing i think is wrong with it but thats just my opinion.
  • enharmonicenharmonic Posts: 1,917
    Take away your drummer's ride cymbal, and get him playing to a click...he's too shaky for a 4/4 song...he has the chops to play it better...a click would help him out. Maybe it was just studio jitters? dunno...but I hear a better drummer in him than this recording reflects.

    Fun song...maybe shorten that second verse and drive the hook a bit more. Singer has an interesting voice...could develop into something instantly catchy in a Rivers Cuomo sorta kinda way. Definitely different than the 101 Eddie wannabe's that flood the radio...a good thing :)

    I'd say not bad for your first go-round...not bad at all.
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