Hidden

CROJAM95
CROJAM95 NEW YORK Posts: 11,201
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Hidden 


Deep into the darkness 

Lying in wait 

Thought it was the right time to surface 

The environment filled with promise 

Forgiveness as the main catalyst 

Fraught with fragility 

It begins its descent into the abyss 

Trust leveled by dark waters 

Only fragments left behind to hold onto 

Four seasons gone in an instant 

Connection turns to isolation 

Solitary confinement of the soul 

Only way out is to is to look within 

You saw what you needed to see 

Sometimes it’s better to stay hidden 

When all you hoped for is forbidden 


-IK

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  • skyeriverwinter
    skyeriverwinter Posts: 1,906
    CROJAM95 said:

    Hidden 


    Deep into the darkness 

    Lying in wait 

    Thought it was the right time to surface 

    The environment filled with promise 

    Forgiveness as the main catalyst 

    Fraught with fragility 

    It begins its descent into the abyss 

    Trust leveled by dark waters 

    Only fragments left behind to hold onto 

    Four seasons gone in an instant 

    Connection turns to isolation 

    Solitary confinement of the soul 

    Only way out is to is to look within 

    You saw what you needed to see 

    Sometimes it’s better to stay hidden 

    When all you hoped for is forbidden 


    -IK


  • CROJAM95
    CROJAM95 NEW YORK Posts: 11,201
    Thank you my friend 😎
  • Starlight7
    Starlight7 Biloxi Posts: 171
    Sometimes one gets caught in a mind trap by someone who created the problem and yet also has the solution. I say you can't be both. You're like the Catholic Church, they are both the cause and the solution. But you can't do that, and He knows it and sees what you did.

    It was only in my mind - which YOU put there. Of course that's forbidden - I was never gonna act on it. But, I just wanted to appease you, never disagree with you, just soften my disappointment by giving thought to your fantasy - in person this whole thing wouldn't have happened.

    I was so relieved to see you think it is forbidden as well.
  • Starlight7
    Starlight7 Biloxi Posts: 171
    Oh, and I do still love you.
  • CROJAM95
    CROJAM95 NEW YORK Posts: 11,201
    Starlight7 said:
    Oh, and I do still love you.


    I’ll have what you are having 😉😝
  • Starlight7
    Starlight7 Biloxi Posts: 171
    CROJAM95 said:
    Starlight7 said:
    Oh, and I do still love you.


    I’ll have what you are having 😉😝
    Well, you would have to be a straight female in deep love with a super sexy and sweet guy who doesn't know any boundaries, not even with fantasy, through no fault of his own. It takes patience and understanding, but mostly love on a saint/martyr level, and I am not even kidding. Thanks for the love, Kim.
  • CROJAM95
    CROJAM95 NEW YORK Posts: 11,201
    ^ Which one are you? Just for context 😉




  • CROJAM95
    CROJAM95 NEW YORK Posts: 11,201
    Been working on one, Larry n Leon’s relationship from Curb

    its a challenge when u pick the subject and actually try vs just going through something and it writing itself 
  • Starlight7
    Starlight7 Biloxi Posts: 171
    edited September 30
    I am neither one of those Kim's - I am my own Kim - an unknown - perhaps even a superunknown - but soon to be known, you know?  LoL  :bee:
  • CROJAM95
    CROJAM95 NEW YORK Posts: 11,201
    Starlight7 said:
    I am neither one of those Kim's - I am my own Kim - an unknown - perhaps even a superunknown - but soon to be known, you know?  LoL  :bee:
    haha good stuff....was trying to decipher the post about all that fiery talk
  • Starlight7
    Starlight7 Biloxi Posts: 171
    "only he can touch"
  • CROJAM95
    CROJAM95 NEW YORK Posts: 11,201

  • Starlight7
    Starlight7 Biloxi Posts: 171
    "Somebody's Heine' is crowdin' my icebox
    Somebody's cold one is givin' me chills"
  • Starlight7
    Starlight7 Biloxi Posts: 171
    Lastly:

    It ain't so.

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