render

my man
 likes a ghost
no seriously

you try loving one who is
grateful dead

I walked one mile in these
silent serious shoes
you be quiet all these times

no seriously

I love my man but this is different
this is like 
silence

and when the wind blows
and when I look down on my  jean ends and these empty shoes

this are those times

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  • hedonisthedonist standing on the edge of foreverPosts: 20,540
    :hug:
  • F Me In The BrainF Me In The Brain this knows everybody from other commetsPosts: 18,233
    :peace:
    The love he receives is the love that is saved
  • Thank you...
  • evsgjammevsgjamm Posts: 1,996
    I can see it. Nice poem.
    Vancouver '03, Paramount Theatre '05, Saskatoon '05, Calgary '05, Edmonton '05, Saskatoon '11, Calgary '11, Calgary '13

    2010 WATCH IT GO TO FIRE!!
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