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She walked out of her door...

jamainiacjamainiac Posts: 429
edited August 2005 in Words and Music...Communication
down the stairs...

the raindrops creating a million tiny circles on the pale blue pool...

she pushed the button... the little button...

and 'Smile' began to play inside of her head...

"I miss you already, I miss you always... three crooked hearts swirls all around... I miss you all day"...

by the time she was up the road... just past the tulips ... where they had held hands and laughed just the day before... now she found herself walking alone in the morning spring rain shower...

the song and ended and another had begun...

..."there he goes... he's off again"...

and the cycle continued...

her heart was cold and confused...

she'd been here before ... and knew she'd be again...
Exercising her will to lose control...
she lets go
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  • Rock_Princess_18Rock_Princess_18 Posts: 304
    Did you write that? Its beautiful.
    "All the things that others want for me.. can't buy what I want because it's free!"

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  • jamainiacjamainiac Posts: 429
    thanks :)

    isn't it amazing when 'inspiration' just ... takes you?!

    I was looking for another thread and came across this one...

    until I got to the third line and the chill went through me...

    I didn't even remember writing it...
    Exercising her will to lose control...
    she lets go
  • maddrummermaddrummer Posts: 93
    ya gt a talent ther!
    Fuck The System
  • who's_pearljam?who's_pearljam? Posts: 2,104
    That's some more beautiful wriing from Jamainiac! :cool:
    You really have a talent for expressing emotion.

    Maybe YOU should go to Ireland and write! :D


    And by the way,, I copied it, then was looking in google for something and pasted it in "search" accidentally instead of "car rental-ireland",, and this came up:

    http://www.google.com/search?hl=en&safe=off&client=safari&rls=en&q=the+raindrops+creating+a+million+tiny+circles+on+the+pale+blue+pool...+she+pushed+the+button...+the+little+button&spell=1
    Be kind, man
    Don't be mankind. ~Captain Beefheart
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