Your own lyrics to a Pearl Jam melody
olderman
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RULES: you must name the song. you must keep the tempo and rhthym of the original recording so that the reader doesn't need to guess and interpret.. just do it.. e.g. as an simple example..
BETTERMAN
sweating, flogging his stock,
it's 12 o'clock,
it never stops...
that's an example..
here's my entry
I AM MINE
the arrogance never enters his mind,
carving a piece of evermore's kind,
stalking and creeping and thus left behind,
be still my mind..
striking is beauty which man must unwind,
all that shines must surely be mine,
for i am the horseman greed in this time,
be still my mind..
and the stealing it gets left way back,
in the barn of an old red hay stack,
there to die as an old man doth hack,
i feel good tonite..
a tobacco stain grows deep inside,
a hack of a cough to deride,
i am not innocent and yet i know right...
I'm safe tonite...........
just a little ditty bout jack n diane... 2 young lovers doin the best they can
BETTERMAN
sweating, flogging his stock,
it's 12 o'clock,
it never stops...
that's an example..
here's my entry
I AM MINE
the arrogance never enters his mind,
carving a piece of evermore's kind,
stalking and creeping and thus left behind,
be still my mind..
striking is beauty which man must unwind,
all that shines must surely be mine,
for i am the horseman greed in this time,
be still my mind..
and the stealing it gets left way back,
in the barn of an old red hay stack,
there to die as an old man doth hack,
i feel good tonite..
a tobacco stain grows deep inside,
a hack of a cough to deride,
i am not innocent and yet i know right...
I'm safe tonite...........
just a little ditty bout jack n diane... 2 young lovers doin the best they can
Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
As she slams the door in his drunken face
And now he stands outside
And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
And his tears fall and burn the garden green
As she slams the door in his drunken face
And now he stands outside
And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
And his tears fall and burn the garden green
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