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awakening

chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
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you might wanna wake up & cry
feel bad for yourself
?what kinda stupid ass life have you lived
with some piss-poor decisions you've made
you have made

stones are bedding
blood's slowly not there anymore

the awkward, it sucks
the past, it's confusion's broken glass under foot
aches all the time
bridges of fire cross
leading over falling canyons crumbling away

the fall
it began at the start





for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

"Hear me, my chiefs!
I am tired; my heart is
sick and sad. From where
the sun stands I will fight
no more forever."
Chief Joseph - Nez Perce

Comments

  • whispering handswhispering hands Posts: 13,527
    chadwick said:

    you might wanna wake up & cry
    feel bad for yourself
    ?what kinda stupid ass life have you lived
    with some piss-poor decisions you've made
    you have made

    stones are bedding
    blood's slowly not there anymore

    the awkward, it sucks
    the past, it's confusion's broken glass under foot
    aches all the time
    bridges of fire cross
    leading over falling canyons crumbling away

    the fall
    it began at the start

    Hits home. Thanks.



  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    a lot of feelings in this one.

    Godfather.
  • LongestRoadLongestRoad Posts: 477
    I've stood looking across over a dark canyon, not able to touch love but knowing there's light coming. We fell hard....
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