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Raging in the Circles

whispering handswhispering hands Under your skin Posts: 13,527
edited August 2016 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Turn this way, turn that way; you're going the wrong way.. AGAIN!
Start over....
Try it again. Go that way, no this way; you're going the wrong way STILL!'
Start over.......
Tell me what you actually want!!!
Full circles to the right, full.. WTF?!? I can't POSSIBLY still be doing it wrong? I am??
Well what is left to try????? I am exhausted,
You have no clue what you want from me, but demand that I know what you want from me...it's like I'm being set up for failure..
Treading water, holding bricks; you just keep stacking them on my head.
Going under. Drowning.

Comments

  • JWPearlJWPearl Posts: 19,893
    drowning is restful lol
    its all the way right 12 times like a clock ;)
  • deadendpdeadendp Northeast Ohio Posts: 10,434
    JWPearl said:

    drowning is restful lol
    its all the way right 12 times like a clock ;)

    This was a serious poem about some serious shit. We read your diatribes all of the time about crap we can't even decipher. For once, think about someone potentially having a shit day. Someone who could maybe use a bit of love and understanding instead of kidding around. Not the time, chickie doodle. Not the time. :angry:

    Tree, we love you.
    2014: Cincinnati
    2016: Lexington and Wrigley 1
  • whispering handswhispering hands Under your skin Posts: 13,527
    Trying to keep it together.
  • deadendpdeadendp Northeast Ohio Posts: 10,434
    whispering hands said:

    Trying to keep it together.

    We're here for you, Tree. Just keep talking. :hug:
    2014: Cincinnati
    2016: Lexington and Wrigley 1
  • hedonisthedonist Posts: 24,524
    Hell yeah, DEP.

    Love from here too, Tree, and the warmest energy sent. I hope you know there are many hands and hearts and shoulders here for you.

    I'm proud to know someone with such a love of nature, and animals. May that be returned to you, tenfold.
  • deadendpdeadendp Northeast Ohio Posts: 10,434
    hedonist said:

    Hell yeah, DEP.

    Love from here too, Tree, and the warmest energy sent. I hope you know there are many hands and hearts and shoulders here for you.

    I'm proud to know someone with such a love of nature, and animals. May that be returned to you, tenfold.

    Indeed, my Jedi Hedo. Indeed.
    2014: Cincinnati
    2016: Lexington and Wrigley 1
  • whispering handswhispering hands Under your skin Posts: 13,527
    Thank you guys, for always understanding when I break down and freak out.
  • deadendpdeadendp Northeast Ohio Posts: 10,434
    We get it, Tree. Keep talking, my friend. Keep talking.
    2014: Cincinnati
    2016: Lexington and Wrigley 1
  • JWPearlJWPearl Posts: 19,893
    deadendp said:

    JWPearl said:

    drowning is restful lol
    its all the way right 12 times like a clock ;)

    This was a serious poem about some serious shit. We read your diatribes all of the time about crap we can't even decipher. For once, think about someone potentially having a shit day. Someone who could maybe use a bit of love and understanding instead of kidding around. Not the time, chickie doodle. Not the time. :angry:

    Tree, we love you.
    sorry.. your right im silly
    hope things get better tree
    i was on a different planet..
    sorry again..
  • whispering handswhispering hands Under your skin Posts: 13,527
    JWPearl said:

    deadendp said:

    JWPearl said:

    drowning is restful lol
    its all the way right 12 times like a clock ;)

    This was a serious poem about some serious shit. We read your diatribes all of the time about crap we can't even decipher. For once, think about someone potentially having a shit day. Someone who could maybe use a bit of love and understanding instead of kidding around. Not the time, chickie doodle. Not the time. :angry:

    Tree, we love you.
    sorry.. your right im silly
    hope things get better tree
    i was on a different planet..
    sorry again..
    No apologies necessary. And thank you.
  • JWPearlJWPearl Posts: 19,893
    You deserve an apology..
  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    this is perfect. thank you for putting this one up there
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • whispering handswhispering hands Under your skin Posts: 13,527
    chadwick said:

    this is perfect. thank you for putting this one up there

    This means a lot coming from you, Chadwick.
    :hug:
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