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smaller written things

it isn't into a spyglass it is written this form
but on the waves of conscientiousness
a book parallels like a thought dropped

formative the belief the written path
a planet forms overnight
for a god

for us a plant
the smaller creations

black sometimes is the wall
a definitive separation from white
but black argumentably the more affixed line of division
as if space is, black beyond must be too

but it's not. it's white and I'd like to write about you
I'd like to write about imagination
of wonderful
imagination being the stronger thing than you or I could even possibly imagine

or even the wonderful memories of unforcedness
childhood made up trees, woods and verses
the following of spirit dwellings into autumn leaves danced
the I can't keep up of what I want to

because sometimes at night it rains bugs
and we cannot, or should not, help this







Comments

  • chadwickchadwick up my assPosts: 21,157
    hey now that's cool
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • brianluxbrianlux Moving through All Kinds of Terrain.Posts: 32,249
    "because sometimes at night it rains bugs
    and we cannot, or should not, help this"

    Man oh man, yes!
    “In all human affairs there are efforts, and there are results, and the strength of the effort is the measure of the result.”
    -James Allen










  • rollingsrollings unknownPosts: 7,107
    thanks, thanks !
  • I keep coming back to this daily, loving your expression, every line its own poem, thank you!
  • rollingsrollings unknownPosts: 7,107
    thanks vogon :star:
  • rollingsrollings unknownPosts: 7,107
    So I searched the word "unforcedness" and found this.  I imagine this is the more edited version :lightbulb:
  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    formative the belief the written path
    a planet forms overnight
    for a god

    fuuuuuuuuck
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
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