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Cheated (stolen verse 6/8/16)

brianluxbrianlux Moving through All Kinds of Terrain. Posts: 42,336
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Cheated
(stolen verse 6/8/16).

Do you ever get the feeling you've been cheated?

Do you ever get the feeling
You've been cheated?

Do you
Ever get the feeling you been cheated?

Do you ever

Get the feeling

You've been cheated?

I have and I do.
Don't you?

"Pretty cookies, heart squares all around, yeah!"
-Eddie Vedder, "Smile"

"Try to not spook the horse."
-Neil Young













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  • SpunkieSpunkie i come from downtown. Posts: 6,734
    Tick tock. Tick tock.
    The numbers say XII.
    Approaching. Closer and Closer...
    But where is IX and where went X?
    The numbers say XII!
    Thief in the shadows.
    Blanket of darkness.

    Do you ever feel cheated?

  • brianluxbrianlux Moving through All Kinds of Terrain. Posts: 42,336
    tish said:

    Tick tock. Tick tock.
    The numbers say XII.
    Approaching. Closer and Closer...
    But where is IX and where went X?
    The numbers say XII!
    Thief in the shadows.
    Blanket of darkness.

    Do you ever feel cheated?

    Excellent! Reminds me of "Song X"
    "Pretty cookies, heart squares all around, yeah!"
    -Eddie Vedder, "Smile"

    "Try to not spook the horse."
    -Neil Young













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