Who is that ?

Godfather.
Godfather. Posts: 12,504
in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Who is that ?
I can hear the tapping on the windows of my heart
and I feel the warm caress of arms around my soul
still I can not see thru the dust and pain that has fallen
on the windows of my heart.

Yet the tapping continues and the warm caress becomes a comfort
a comfort that I have never known before
who is that ?


Godfather.



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  • whispering hands
    whispering hands Under your skin Posts: 13,527
    I really like this!!
  • hedonist
    hedonist Posts: 24,524
    Maybe that "who" is yourself, GF.

    Part of the journey?
  • whispering hands
    whispering hands Under your skin Posts: 13,527
    Or a memory
  • Godfather.
    Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    whispering hands said:

    I really like this!!

    thank you very much !!! you just made my Monday !

    Godfather.

  • Godfather.
    Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    hedonist said:

    Maybe that "who" is yourself, GF.

    Part of the journey?

    maybe,..the journey has been a pretty wild ride and I believe I've been Blessed/looked after on more than one ocassion,I can only tell stories of my ride but not on the train :))
    but you are spot on, for the most part I believe we create our journey thru the choices we make and sometime we are given a situation that may have required more thinking before we made our choice's......as a younger man I may not have thought some things all the way thru before making a choice but I like to think I keep learning everyday as we all do...HHAHHAHHA you only have kick me in the ass twice :))

    Godfather.
  • whispering hands
    whispering hands Under your skin Posts: 13,527
    I'm stealing that as a quote!! ( about only having to kick you in your ass twice!)
  • Godfather.
    Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    whispering hands said:

    I'm stealing that as a quote!! ( about only having to kick you in your ass twice!)

    HAHHAHHHAHHAHA LOVE IT !!!!

    Godfather.

  • whispering hands
    whispering hands Under your skin Posts: 13,527
    As you can see, I stole it proper! vvvv
  • Theia
    Theia Posts: 145
    i like the mystery in this one

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