Driftin

freshymad
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Driftin in and out
Of conscious mind
Worry carried over
An other titan mile
This wine
Drinks to you
From the night with
Taking sides
Let go of searching
Trinkets in the sand
Or tying string around my fingers red
So tight it rings me numb
Palms facing sky
Fingers so alive
Words band
The space between
Regardless
... This is bad and unfinished.
Of conscious mind
Worry carried over
An other titan mile
This wine
Drinks to you
From the night with
Taking sides
Let go of searching
Trinkets in the sand
Or tying string around my fingers red
So tight it rings me numb
Palms facing sky
Fingers so alive
Words band
The space between
Regardless
... This is bad and unfinished.
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It may be unfinished, but I don't think it's bad at all, I think it's beautiful! Would love to read it once it's finished. :-)Music is my Religion and Pearl Jam, my Savior!
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