Ain't it Some young Poem

don't tell me that an alley way of pines is far from your dreams
it's not far from your childhood it it's
remember that, dads
and moms
the light from childhood to dreams is direct
all those who trudge through the sludge of everyday
or who spring it in rings

misty frozen forgotten vegetables
discovered in rings of trees
in cubs of
when half used to be 50 but twice is now 80 percent more
keep on
creeping in heaps and
jumping in humps

introducestal
when ya'll

was ten


Comments

  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    reread a few times
    unique lines
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • Jason78Jason78 Posts: 400
    edited May 2014
    I get it. Cool.
    I will say, it sounds like you were hammered. Haha. It's pure though. Truth.
    Post edited by Jason78 on
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