PEARL JAM FAN HAIKU CONTEST! Prizes: PJ vinyl!! 1st place gets a Red LB! **WINNERS** on pg 11.

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  • PJ_Soul
    PJ_Soul Vancouver, BC Posts: 50,668
    smarchee said:

    fondly yearing to apply F5
    blood pressure and sweat would accumulate instantly
    lottery brought less doctor visits

    Crikey, that's a lot of syllables! image
    With all its sham, drudgery, and broken dreams, it is still a beautiful world. Be careful. Strive to be happy. ~ Desiderata
  • PJ_Soul
    PJ_Soul Vancouver, BC Posts: 50,668
    on2legs said:

    ed243421 said:

    crazy mary comes
    out from booms pounding organ
    while ed shares his wine

    Pounding organ?
    image
    With all its sham, drudgery, and broken dreams, it is still a beautiful world. Be careful. Strive to be happy. ~ Desiderata
  • smarchee
    smarchee Windsor, Ontario Posts: 14,539
    PJ_Soul said:

    smarchee said:

    fondly yearing to apply F5
    blood pressure and sweat would accumulate instantly
    lottery brought less doctor visits

    Crikey, that's a lot of syllables! image
    oh shit, I thought it was words L-)

    sorry prof, I should read the whole assignment
    1998 ~ Barrie
    2003 ~ Toronto
    2005 ~ London, Toronto
    2006 ~ Toronto
    2008 ~ Hartford, Mansfied I,
    2009 ~ Toronto, Chicago I, Chicago II
    2010 ~ Cleveland, Buffalo
    2011 ~ Toronto I, Toronto II, Ottawa, Hamilton
    2013 - London, Pittsburgh, Buffalo
    2014 - Detroit
    2019 - Chicago X 2
  • smarchee
    smarchee Windsor, Ontario Posts: 14,539
    edited April 2014
    F5 memories
    any show on tour I could get
    lottery negate
    1998 ~ Barrie
    2003 ~ Toronto
    2005 ~ London, Toronto
    2006 ~ Toronto
    2008 ~ Hartford, Mansfied I,
    2009 ~ Toronto, Chicago I, Chicago II
    2010 ~ Cleveland, Buffalo
    2011 ~ Toronto I, Toronto II, Ottawa, Hamilton
    2013 - London, Pittsburgh, Buffalo
    2014 - Detroit
    2019 - Chicago X 2
  • KC2917
    KC2917 Posts: 872
    smarchee said:

    F5 memories
    any show on tour I could get
    lottery negate

    Try one more time...
  • PJ_Soul
    PJ_Soul Vancouver, BC Posts: 50,668
    edited April 2014
    smarchee said:

    F5 memories
    any show on tour I could get
    lottery negate

    That's more like it. :-bd :P

    (oh wait - 8 syllables in the middle, lol. C'mon Smarchee, this is getting embarrassing :-j )
    Post edited by PJ_Soul on
    With all its sham, drudgery, and broken dreams, it is still a beautiful world. Be careful. Strive to be happy. ~ Desiderata
  • smarchee
    smarchee Windsor, Ontario Posts: 14,539
    PJ_Soul said:

    smarchee said:

    F5 memories
    any show on tour I could get
    lottery negate

    That's more like it. :-bd :P

    (oh wait - 8 syllables in the middle, lol. C'mon Smarchee, this is getting embarrassing :-j )
    what, that's 7 no?? *counts on fingers*

    I need that damn bouncing ball

    ahhhh any is two syllables? frig
    1998 ~ Barrie
    2003 ~ Toronto
    2005 ~ London, Toronto
    2006 ~ Toronto
    2008 ~ Hartford, Mansfied I,
    2009 ~ Toronto, Chicago I, Chicago II
    2010 ~ Cleveland, Buffalo
    2011 ~ Toronto I, Toronto II, Ottawa, Hamilton
    2013 - London, Pittsburgh, Buffalo
    2014 - Detroit
    2019 - Chicago X 2
  • smarchee
    smarchee Windsor, Ontario Posts: 14,539
    F5 memories
    any show on tour could get
    lottery negate

    final answer :P
    1998 ~ Barrie
    2003 ~ Toronto
    2005 ~ London, Toronto
    2006 ~ Toronto
    2008 ~ Hartford, Mansfied I,
    2009 ~ Toronto, Chicago I, Chicago II
    2010 ~ Cleveland, Buffalo
    2011 ~ Toronto I, Toronto II, Ottawa, Hamilton
    2013 - London, Pittsburgh, Buffalo
    2014 - Detroit
    2019 - Chicago X 2
  • SD48277
    SD48277 Posts: 12,243
    The band takes the stage
    My soul is Given to Fly
    And I am Alive
    ELITIST FUK
  • PJ_Soul
    PJ_Soul Vancouver, BC Posts: 50,668
    smarchee said:

    F5 memories
    any show on tour could get
    lottery negate

    final answer :P

    image
    With all its sham, drudgery, and broken dreams, it is still a beautiful world. Be careful. Strive to be happy. ~ Desiderata
  • Wobbie
    Wobbie Posts: 31,273
    Poncier said:

    imalive said:

    there once was a man from Nantucket....

    oh......haiku?......sorry.

    Just need to convert poetry formats:

    Man from Nantucket
    Long dong becomes lollipop
    Wipes chin looks at ear

    winner!

    :)>-
    If I had known then what I know now...

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    VIC 07
    EV LA1 08
    Seattle1 09, Seattle2 09, Salt Lake 09, LA4 09
    Columbus 10
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    Vancouver 11
    Missoula 12
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  • thumbingmyway13
    thumbingmyway13 Posts: 502
    ONCE through FUTURE DAYS
    In my heart that music stays
    Where it plays and plays
  • smarchee
    smarchee Windsor, Ontario Posts: 14,539
    tambourine I need
    child increases the chance
    bragging rights for me
    1998 ~ Barrie
    2003 ~ Toronto
    2005 ~ London, Toronto
    2006 ~ Toronto
    2008 ~ Hartford, Mansfied I,
    2009 ~ Toronto, Chicago I, Chicago II
    2010 ~ Cleveland, Buffalo
    2011 ~ Toronto I, Toronto II, Ottawa, Hamilton
    2013 - London, Pittsburgh, Buffalo
    2014 - Detroit
    2019 - Chicago X 2
  • KC2917
    KC2917 Posts: 872
    smarchee said:

    tambourine I need
    child increases the chance
    bragging rights for me

    Recount that second line please. I don't think haikus are your thing bro.
  • smarchee
    smarchee Windsor, Ontario Posts: 14,539
    KC2917 said:

    smarchee said:

    tambourine I need
    child increases the chance
    bragging rights for me

    Recount that second line please. I don't think haikus are your thing bro.
    isn't child and chance one syllable each? lol
    1998 ~ Barrie
    2003 ~ Toronto
    2005 ~ London, Toronto
    2006 ~ Toronto
    2008 ~ Hartford, Mansfied I,
    2009 ~ Toronto, Chicago I, Chicago II
    2010 ~ Cleveland, Buffalo
    2011 ~ Toronto I, Toronto II, Ottawa, Hamilton
    2013 - London, Pittsburgh, Buffalo
    2014 - Detroit
    2019 - Chicago X 2
  • KC2917
    KC2917 Posts: 872
    smarchee said:

    KC2917 said:

    smarchee said:

    tambourine I need
    child increases the chance
    bragging rights for me

    Recount that second line please. I don't think haikus are your thing bro.
    isn't child and chance one syllable each? lol
    Yes. Yes they are. That makes six by my count.
  • WhatYouTaughtMe
    WhatYouTaughtMe Posts: 4,957
    edited April 2014
    H
    Post edited by WhatYouTaughtMe on
  • smarchee
    smarchee Windsor, Ontario Posts: 14,539
    KC2917 said:

    smarchee said:

    KC2917 said:

    smarchee said:

    tambourine I need
    child increases the chance
    bragging rights for me

    Recount that second line please. I don't think haikus are your thing bro.
    isn't child and chance one syllable each? lol
    Yes. Yes they are. That makes six by my count.
    hey I get 7 in the second line
    1998 ~ Barrie
    2003 ~ Toronto
    2005 ~ London, Toronto
    2006 ~ Toronto
    2008 ~ Hartford, Mansfied I,
    2009 ~ Toronto, Chicago I, Chicago II
    2010 ~ Cleveland, Buffalo
    2011 ~ Toronto I, Toronto II, Ottawa, Hamilton
    2013 - London, Pittsburgh, Buffalo
    2014 - Detroit
    2019 - Chicago X 2
  • KC2917
    KC2917 Posts: 872
    smarchee said:

    KC2917 said:

    smarchee said:

    KC2917 said:

    smarchee said:

    tambourine I need
    child increases the chance
    bragging rights for me

    Recount that second line please. I don't think haikus are your thing bro.
    isn't child and chance one syllable each? lol
    Yes. Yes they are. That makes six by my count.
    hey I get 7 in the second line
    Trust me here. It's six.
  • JB23237
    JB23237 Posts: 1,381
    Change chance to chances and you got 7
    Problem solved
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