Forgive me, forgive you

Forgive me, forgive you

Clean slate
We’re all safe
No more dead end street
No more tired feet

No more circling back for company!
Love is left half-way between you & me

(Forever paused)

Love’s body frozen mid-step.
A prehistoric mountaineer captured
left beneath an ancient avalanche
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Comments

  • the wolfthe wolf Posts: 7,027
    This is great,... as always.
    Peace, Love.


    "To question your government is not unpatriotic --
    to not question your government is unpatriotic."
    -- Sen. Chuck Hagel
  • AafkeAafke Posts: 1,219
    I like this one a lot...
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    "The meeting of two personalities is like the contact of two chemical substances: if there is any reaction, both are transformed".- Carl Jung.
    "Art does not reproduce what we see; rather, it makes us see."- Paul Klee
  • justam said:

    Forgive me, forgive you

    Clean slate
    We’re all safe
    No more dead end street
    No more tired feet

    No more circling back for company!
    Love is left half-way between you & me

    (Forever paused)

    Love’s body frozen mid-step.
    A prehistoric mountaineer captured
    left beneath an ancient avalanche

    this is good stuff here. nice job. i can totally relate to this. unfortunately....

    there is someone in my life where the love is left halfway in between us. i want it more, but she doesn't. so it is just lying there on the groud unclaimed. right where i left it for her.
    "You can tell the greatness of a man by what makes him angry."  - Lincoln

    "Well, you tell him that I don't talk to suckas."
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    Thanks for reading it!
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  • perfectly stated for this frozen winter's edge that I am in right now, Thank you
  • the wolfthe wolf Posts: 7,027

    justam said:

    Forgive me, forgive you

    Clean slate
    We’re all safe
    No more dead end street
    No more tired feet

    No more circling back for company!
    Love is left half-way between you & me

    (Forever paused)

    Love’s body frozen mid-step.
    A prehistoric mountaineer captured
    left beneath an ancient avalanche

    this is good stuff here. nice job. i can totally relate to this. unfortunately....

    there is someone in my life where the love is left halfway in between us. i want it more, but she doesn't. so it is just lying there on the groud unclaimed. right where i left it for her.

    Sam situation I'm in Gimmie.
    Peace, Love.


    "To question your government is not unpatriotic --
    to not question your government is unpatriotic."
    -- Sen. Chuck Hagel
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    I sometimes wonder why the sad pieces I write seem to resonate with more people than my uplifting pieces.


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