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Ocean Song

JT214511JT214511 Posts: 36
edited December 2013 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Ocean Song
Far down here, we give light
In this secret house, of hidden things
Weightless in awareness of our solitude
We give all of our feeling to the ocean song

Visionaries mean nothing here
Tactility is everything
'Cause the universe is dark this year
Just floating in the ether

Diving down
We shed our masks
And we break the pacts
That held us in
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  • rollingsrollings Posts: 7,124
    JT214511 wrote:
    Far down here, we give light
    In this secret house, of hidden things
    Weightless in awareness of our solitude
    We give all of our feeling to the ocean song

    Visionaries mean nothing here
    Tactility is everything
    'Cause the universe is dark this year
    Just floating in the ether

    Diving down
    We shed our masks
    And we break the pacts
    That held us in

    nice nice :)
  • JT214511JT214511 Posts: 36
    rollings wrote:
    JT214511 wrote:
    Far down here, we give light
    In this secret house, of hidden things
    Weightless in awareness of our solitude
    We give all of our feeling to the ocean song

    Visionaries mean nothing here
    Tactility is everything
    'Cause the universe is dark this year
    Just floating in the ether

    Diving down
    We shed our masks
    And we break the pacts
    That held us in

    nice nice :)


    Thank you :) I've really been enjoying your work too. I like your line, "time, being round as the clock it is, offers ornament, not containment," from No Room, Go In. Ornament, not containment. Really cool!
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